Ocean Eyes

x_dobby

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General Short Story 2,135 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Alia is a girl living in the Virgin Islands. This is her story.

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Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: Ocean Eyes

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x_dobby

Member Since 2007 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 41 Reviews Written | 36 Review Responses

hi.

check out my livejournal for stuff on me. anyway, i recently finished my first novel, and i'm not sure if i can put it up online and then get it published later in my life. so i'm working on that. but if i can, i'll def. be posting it! :]

UPDATE: just found out that i can't post my novel online. sorry, guys!! but i'd rather get it published into a real book than put it up online. i'm going to try to get it published soon. :]

*CURRENTLY WORKING ON*

Sweet Memories ;; 6 1/2 chapters finished ;; no chapters in queue ;; 7 chapters total ;; An action story with a side of romance featuring Harry Potter and Ginevra Weasley

Secrets of Shell Cottage ;; 2 chapters finished ;; none submitted ;; 3-5 chapters total (haven't decided yet) ;; Luna and Dean were at Shell Cottage with Harry, Ron and Hermione... this is what they did those fateful weeks

'I Live for You' ;; 3 1/4 chapters finished ;; none submitted ;; 5 or 6 chapters total (haven't decided) ;; A fateful night with Draco Malfoy turns Ron against Hermione, so she and Ginny concoct a dastardly plan for winning him back--slight humor, mostly romance/drama

*wipes brow and collapses on couch* phew... I need to get to work. ;]

xxOlivia
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9/10

Katie616

That was a very good story! I really liked it. Alia reflects who I sort of am. I would just love to live by the ocean, and I would totally go down and spen the whole day on the jetty, just reading or looking out over the waves. Though I don't have ocean-blue/green eyes. I have sundappled forest-green eyes, not sea-green ones.

But she totally mirrors my personality. That is exactly what I would do on a rainy day, though I happen to like four-hundred word long tomes with pompous words in them (though I keep a dictionary handy). They are very comforting on a rainy day. Though I could easily reread my favorite book, if, that is, I could decide on which Tamora Pierce book is my favorite.

But seriously. This was a really good story, even if it might not have had too much of a point (I'm not saying it didn't have any, it just didn't have much).

But I'm being called away. I'll look you up sometime, and comment a bit more when I have the time.

Katie

Response from x_dobby (Author of Ocean Eyes)

thank you so much!! i'm glad you left a long review--lots to read. :] yeah, i'm kind of the 400-page book person myself. (harry potter, for one.) anyway, thanks again! hope to see you later. xxolivia

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