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Trouble with Magic

1: Trouble is Brewing

2: The Truth Will Set You Free

3: Finding A Way

Trouble with Magic

silverdoe

10 Reviews   |   10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Drama General Alternate Universe Malfoy Manor 6,832 Words 3 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Albus Dumbledore Arthur Weasley Kingsley Shacklebolt Minerva McGonagall Dobby

The Malfoys have a very special magical artifact in their home. It is always getting Draco in trouble. The latest trouble could disrupt Lucius' plans for his family.

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Trouble is Brewing

Chapter 2: The Truth Will Set You Free

Chapter 3: Finding A Way


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silverdoe

Member Since 2007  |  16 Stories  |  Favorited by 32  |  180 Reviews Written  |  601 Review Responses

I am just a fan who likes to tell stories.I don't pretend to be an author and I may not even be very good at it, but I enjoy it. It gives me a break from real life.

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0/10

Marieanne

So far this story is really interesting!  Do you plan on updating this story?

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

I do plan to finish it, but not until my other WIP are done. thanks for the review.

0/10

Lkmaide

I hope you plan to update. . .

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

Oh, of course, and soon. Sorry. been away during the holidays. A new chapter will be up soon.

8/10

surfmistress

Great start, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

You make a softer Lucius quite believeable. Although I think he may fall back into his old ways if the mother of his grandchild is who I think it is ;-)

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

I'm glad you liked it. I guess we will have to wait and see how Lucius reacts. Next chapter will be up soon.

10/10

aura

This is great!!! 

I wonder about the bust.  Since the baby is still in Hermione's womb...will the bust report it as being bad if she has morning sickness, or later if it kicks her bladder at an inoppertune time......seriously though, if Draco asked the bust where his child was, would it be able to tell them where to find Hermione? 

I love the family dynamics, and I'm including Severus with that.  Looking forward to seeing where your imagination takes us.  And Hermione's eventual appearance. 

The race is on now: will the order find her before the Death Eaters, or before she finds out she's pregnant?    Can you imagine Snape's face if he had to break the news to her? 

Looking forward to the next!

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

I would love to answer all of your questions, but I feel that doing so may give away the story. So I will be cruel and say you will just have to wait and see. New posts should be up soon. Thanks for the review!

9/10

chyara

Great start.can't wait for the next chapter.

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

Thanks! Chapter 3 is just about complete. stay tuned

10/10

aura

Oh, I'm loving this!  Lucius, Severus and the other Malfoys are great.  And I like who you chose to be told by Minerva. 

Are you going to try to stay true to DH canon?  I'm afraid she'd lose the baby when Bellatrix tortures her... 

I hope to see this continue soon.

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

I am glad you are enjoying this. I am too. I do not intend to stay true to canon, though I will be using aspects of it throughout the story. Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

jadecadence

why abandon this? i can finish this for u!

0/10

moor

Oh God no, you didn't continue past this spot? NoooooO!!
I hope you don't mind me adding this story to my Favourites; I'd love it if it were ever continued. ^_^b
Thanks for sharing, I couldn't put it down!

10/10

maryperk

Going through my favorites here and I reread this one.  I wanted to say that I love the start of this story.  I certainly hope that the plot kitty returns at some point because it's really interesting.  I love Dramoine... well, Hermoine with just about any Slytherin actually (except Voldemort).  LOL

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

I hope it will return someday too. Thanks for reviewing

10/10

maryperk

Interesting start.  Hope to read more soon.

Response from silverdoe (Author of Trouble with Magic)

Thanks, I hope to write more soon, just a small mental block on it right now. I plan to tackle it more this week.

Response from maryperk (Reviewer)

Ah, yes, writer's block.  It's such a bitch.  LOL.  Here's some sardines for the plot kitties.  Hope they visit you soon.

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