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Tweaking
WriterMerrin10 Reviews | 5.9/10 (10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
The elixir "induces euphoria in the drinker, with occasional side effects of excessive singing and nose-tweaking" -HBP
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Member Since 2006 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 51 | 822 Reviews Written | 741 Review Responses
Sometimes writing, nearly always beta reading, I love to unwind after work by reading fanfiction.
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Lily has never been my favourite person, but here she is sweet and kind to young Sev, well done.
Oh lords how funny! Lily tweaking his nose! Good thing Sirius cottonn on to what was happening and got James out of there! What a berk James was being!
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Yep. It's obvious why Lily prefers Sev over James at this point in their lives. Thank you very much.
Cute! Lily tweaking Severus' nose is precious.Beth
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Thank you very much. I saw it as a potential beginning of their heightened awareness of each other... and, of course, cute.
LOL I had to come find this gem. I loved the second part and this is even funnier! Good of Sirius to figure out the potions effects were making Lily behave the way she was! James was being a right git! LOL Really cute, doll.
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Yeah, I always thought that Sirius was smarter than he appeared. This was a whole lot more fun to write, being part of the "Romancing the Wizard" community and being able to use commas.
Love the nose-tweaking!
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Thanks. When I went to write this story, I knew that I wanted them to be working on a potion together, so I went to a list of potions, and when I found this one, I knew it was the perfect one for the young couple.
Oh, what a sweet little piece - shows a bit of what Dumbledore meant when he mused that perhaps they Sort too early. Lovely!
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Thanks for taking a moment to let me know you liked this piece :)
Oh, that's really cute! It's nice to see Lily at one of the moments when their friendship was a friendship.
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Thanks! LE/SS was my first Snape pairing, and I love them like this.
This story left me in a rather cheery mood. Thanks!
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Thank YOU! I laughed a lot as I wrote this, coming up with different scenarios such as one where they were actually interruped mid-snog, but I liked it, and I'm glad you did, too!
Very cute. I loved it.
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Aww, thanks for rescuing this story from the zero. Glad you loved it.
This was really cute and amusing! Great last line! I love a perfectly rounded one-shot, and I really enjoyed this.
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Thanks! I love a challenge to say all I want in a certain word count. I think it makes me work harder, and I'm glad to see it paid off!
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)
Thanks! I love a challenge to say all I want in a certain word count. I think it makes me work harder, and I'm glad to see it paid off!