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Malfoy Manor Scream
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Scream

1: I Swore I’d Never Let Her Go

Scream

Pipperstorms

7 Reviews   |   7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Romance Alternate Universe post-HBP/HBP compliant Malfoy Manor 2,015 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Draco Malfoy Ginevra Weasley Lucius Malfoy

Oh, Merlin, it hurts. Everything hurts. I can’t even see straight. Oh, forget seeing; I can’t think straight. All I know is that we’re all going to die. We’re all going to die, and it’s going to be ridiculously painful. I shouldn’t have to die like this. No one my age should have to die like this. Yet here we all are, fighting for our lives and losing.

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Chapter 1: I Swore I’d Never Let Her Go


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9/10

sinbad

Interesting.  However it would have been nice to know who these people were. Ginny, Lilly, Molly?  All of whom are red heads who was dying?

0/10

Bettina

wow, well done!  I love how he rushes through so many thoughts while there is a fierce fight he has to concentrate on.Yes, please, publish the sequel! Please show some mercy with those who love!

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

It is up now, for your viewing pleasure!

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

It is up now, for your viewing pleasure!

0/10

timestep

I almost didn't read this, as I was in the mood to be entertained by something light-hearted, but I was pulled to it anyway.I'm so glad I did as it was beautiful and I really hope you post the sequel.

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

Part two is posted and ready for your enjoyment :-)  I'm happy youread it anyways,and sorry that it isn't at all light hearted.

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

Part two is posted and ready for your enjoyment :-)  I'm happy youread it anyways,and sorry that it isn't at all light hearted.

0/10

shellsnapeluver

Well, this was different! I'm glad you wrote it in first person, because it seems like you challenged yourself to do it and it read very well.Good job!Shell!

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

Thanks.  It had been my very first, first person experiment.  It launched me into a world where I wrote in third, a lot.  I almost can't escape it now!

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

Thanks.  It had been my very first, first person experiment.  It launched me into a world where I wrote in third, a lot.  I almost can't escape it now!

0/10

pottermania

hmmmm........ very interesting and different from the normal fare.... looking forward to the sequel when you put it up.........

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

I'm very pleased that you saw it as different :-)

10/10

Dancingkatz

You realise that you've made me cry, don't you? Beautifully written (and I know how horribly difficult it is to write in the first person and make it good) and utterly heart breaking.Bravo!

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

Response from Pipperstorms (Author of Scream)

Thank you very much.  And yes, this was my first exploration with first person :-X  It was deffentally an adventure!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Wow, very intense. Thank you for sharing this.
/M

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