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Redemption
x_dobby1 Review | 9.0/10 (1 Rating, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
A poem I wrote a while ago. A little morbid, but I hope everyone likes it. :]
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x_dobby
Member Since 2007 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 41 Reviews Written | 36 Review Responses
hi.
check out my livejournal for stuff on me. anyway, i recently finished my first novel, and i'm not sure if i can put it up online and then get it published later in my life. so i'm working on that. but if i can, i'll def. be posting it! :]
UPDATE: just found out that i can't post my novel online. sorry, guys!! but i'd rather get it published into a real book than put it up online. i'm going to try to get it published soon. :]
*CURRENTLY WORKING ON*
Sweet Memories ;; 6 1/2 chapters finished ;; no chapters in queue ;; 7 chapters total ;; An action story with a side of romance featuring Harry Potter and Ginevra Weasley
Secrets of Shell Cottage ;; 2 chapters finished ;; none submitted ;; 3-5 chapters total (haven't decided yet) ;; Luna and Dean were at Shell Cottage with Harry, Ron and Hermione... this is what they did those fateful weeks
'I Live for You' ;; 3 1/4 chapters finished ;; none submitted ;; 5 or 6 chapters total (haven't decided) ;; A fateful night with Draco Malfoy turns Ron against Hermione, so she and Ginny concoct a dastardly plan for winning him back--slight humor, mostly romance/drama
*wipes brow and collapses on couch* phew... I need to get to work. ;]
xxOlivia
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Reviews for Redemption
Morbid, indeed. It leaves much to the imagination which is quite pleasing. One wonders if he loved the girl and was rejected. Or possibly something a bit more trivial happened, like being teased in elementary school by her.I also enjoyed the rhyming, intelligent without sounding forced. Very good.
Response from x_dobby (Author of Redemption)
thanks for the review! yeah, i wanted to leave enough of a cliffhanger to let the readers' imaginations run. i'm glad you liked it. xxolivia