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Deadly Truth
ayerf11 Reviews | 6.27/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )
Written for the ‘Perils of Veritaserum’ challenge on GS100.
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ayerf
Member Since 2006 | 30 Stories | Favorited by 277 | 151 Reviews Written | 1,977 Review Responses
Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.
Reviews for Deadly Truth
Dear Ron, if I were you , I would stay with the, cute, fuffy, little spiders. It will be a tip-toe through the tulips, compared with faceing Hermione.
Oh my goodness, what was Ron thinking? I guess he really wasn't. So lucky Shape acted when he did. Well, we hope she's lucky, anyway.
Oh, a fitting punishment indeed! Yes, I can see this happening - nicely done. Thank you very much for posting it, Cat
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Thank you! I'm delighted to hear it.
Just one detention? I think Ron deserves many many more. Hermione will be none to pleased when recovers...I would watch my back if I were you Ron!
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Ron certainly does. Perhaps Severus will give him more at the end of each detention, just when Ron thinks he's finally safe?And you're right, he'd also need to watch out for Hermione's wrath.Thanks for reviewing!
Ron deserved more than that, I think.
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Quite possibly! But Severus did have restrictions that being in a position of responsibility brings.
But then, what better revenge is there than for Ron to see Severus get the girl? Presuming I continue this, that is.
Ooh. I'd like to read more on this one!
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Thanks for reviewing! Glad to hear that it's drawn your interest.
Argh! Nothing quite like a pouncing plot bunny to scare me... I'll see what I can do with the idea of continuing it.
Response from averygoodun (Reviewer)
Oh, don't force it, but... well, it just makes me itch to find out what happens after that. What happened before that. Why did Ron do it? How would Hermione and Severus cope with the knowledge? Would they flirt? Would it get out around school?
As I said, I'd like to read more and find out. But if this is all, then that's all and well done!
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Those are some interesting questions...
This was intended to be a single set of drabbles, but it was open ended. I'll certainly keep an expansion in mind.
Thanks!
Good one! Not only does Ron pick up the wrong bottle, but his detention is delicious. (certified Ron hater)
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Thank you! He got what he deserved. (not a Ron hater, but dislikes him with Hermione for obvious reasons)
Great drabble. I love the timing between Snape's arrival/the confession and the smile/faint. It would be so easy for Hermione and Snape to cover up everything if they needed to. Thanks!
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Thank you! I hoped that the timing would work well. You're right, it would be easy for them to cover it up. Hopefully they would not need to!
I enjoyed this ficlet, especially the spider-fearing Ron's punishment. Also, Hermione's fainting at Snape's smile.
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Thanks, I'm glad you did.
Poetic justice, I hope! Snape smiling must be an unusual sight... and a little too much on top of everything else for Hermione.
take that you swinish ron, you! seviekins to the rescue! thanks so much
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Thank you! If Ron doesn't already regret it, he will do after his detention...
From live acromantulas, I hope. Twit!
Response from ayerf (Author of Deadly Truth)
Absolutely! Ron definitely deserves it.