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Novelette Pegasus Rider
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Pegasus Rider

1: Chapter 1: Meet the Barbarouts

2: Chapter 2: The Boy Who Climbed Trees

3: Chapter 3: The Ladder

4: Chapter 4: Night Sky

Pegasus Rider

Deavlynn

3 Reviews   |   3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Action/Adventure Novelette 5,007 Words 4 Chapters WIP

A young boy finds a passage to a strange and wonderful world. He and his new friends battle against evil together.
Themes: bullying, good vs. evil, dating, friendships, sibling rivalry, etc.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meet the Barbarouts

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Boy Who Climbed Trees

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Ladder

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Night Sky


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10/10

Soul Bound

Man, this poor guy.  I remember being picked on like that by my older brother too, although I can't say it was ever as violent as rock-throwing.  You're doing a great job, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for him as a way out of this monotonous nightmare.

Response from Deavlynn (Author of Pegasus Rider)

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying David's story.

I'm sorry you had to live with a brother like that.

I have several more chapters written, and I am slowly getting them submitted and pushed through the que. I am looking forward to finishing this tale.

Thanks for reviewing!!!

Response from Soul Bound (Reviewer)

No worries, lol, we're best friends now, but I can definitely feel for David. I look forward to more!

10/10

Soul Bound

I really like the way you've introduced this.  Already I feel for this kid and hope he finds something special. Great writing! I'll eagerly await each chapter. :D

0/10

spiderwort

You've really set the scene and the characters in a very short sketch.  I feel sorry for David (having been bullied by older brothers myelf--Lord, that's just exactly the way they act), but I also think he feels a bit too sorry for himself (also the way I did).  It makes me think he's going to get jolted out of his complacent self-pity pretty soon.  His parents are so funny, but a llittle sad too.  I can almost believe his workaholic father would try to work on his laptop while driving.  Can''t wait to read more. 

Response from Deavlynn (Author of Pegasus Rider)

Thanks for reviewing!  Sorry it took me so long to respond.  I didn't realize anyone was still reading this story. :)  I agree that David soon needs to grow out of his self-pitty and he will, when he settles in with a group of friends who are stronger than he.  I've actually written quite a bit more of this tale but I've become lax in my posting.  I'll make an attempt at returning to that. :)

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