Little White Lies
Demeterschild4 Reviews | 7.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
A series of dark drabbles written for the whoops challenge on GrangerSnape100.
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Holy cow this is dark and twisted! Needless to say I loved it!
Shudder...just another reason that the Dark Lord is so dangerous. I had to ask myself the question if Snape DID figure out it was Hermione before the AK, what would he have done?
Response from Demeterschild (Author of Little White Lies)
*nod* I'm not quite sure what he would have done. Part of me says that there isn't much he could have done on the other hand, there's a part of me that says he would have done whatever it took.
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<With eyes screwed shut, ears plugged, chanting:> "It didn't happen. It didn't happen. It didn't happen."
I'm off to go read something happy now. 
Author's Response: Sorry! I promise to write something very fluffy very soon!
Br-r-r-r-r-r...that one sent cold chills down my spine. I *did* initially wonder if the victim might be Hermione -- but when you mentioned blonde hair and green eyes, that threw me off (and I have no doubt that it was intentional). The only suggestion that I might make is that you might have had either Voldemort or Severus cast a Silencing spell on her -- because I found myself wondering at the end why Hermione never cried out. After all, one would think that she would be screaming under this sort of treatment -- but at the same time, Severus might have recognized her voice if she had cried out even though she was disguised.
Response from Demeterschild (Author of Little White Lies)
Thanks! It was definitely intentional that Hermione was disguised. As far as the noise goes, I kind of imagine that Snape retreats to a special place in his head where he doesn't register a whole lot of things. I believe that as soon as he leaves, he goes through his head and counts a million reasons why he should have recognized her sooner.
On the other hand, since this is exclusively from Snape's point of view, I don't really know if Voldie put a Silencing charm on her. Although I doubt it since screams are usually part of the torture process. I'm going to go with the first reason and say that whether or not she was screaming, Snape just didn't recognize her voice.
Thanks for the review and the constructive criticism (it's the best kind)!