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A Better Decision

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A Better Decision

Southern_Witch_69

23 Reviews   |   23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )

Drama compliant post-DH/DH Hogwarts Castle 1,741 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Severus Snape

Harry's dream of what could be his future isn't quite what he wants anymore. First, he needs to find Snape. Post DH.

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Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for A Better Decision

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0/10

kimjo2

now that's what should have happened. thanks so much.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

We can only dream. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

We can only dream. :)

10/10

murgy31

That was wonderful!!!! You are so talented.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

You're so sweet. Thank you. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

You're so sweet. Thank you. :)

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teshara

That last bit reminded me of Rapunzel. Don't ask me why.I think this is a really neat take on what happened to Snape's body and it gives a sense of closure for him and Harry.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Rapunzel. LOL :) Thanks

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Rapunzel. LOL :) Thanks

10/10

StormySkize

This is just the type of 'ending' that I was looking for (and didn't find) in DH. I really liked this story.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Agree with that. Thank you! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Agree with that. Thank you! :)

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

This was a very pleasant story. I had wanted Snape to come out the hero, but I didn't want him to die (obviously), and I really wanted to see Harry and Snape have a conversation about everything. I liked that you gave Harry a chance to say those things. I also like how it ended: with hope of peace and no chance of Harry's life ending up like it did in the epilogue—er—the dream you made him have. And I like that I can imagine what will happen at Grimmauld Place. Especially if I get to pretend that they'll… um… get along really well. Thanks for the story!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Well, I am really thinking of continuing it because I'd like to have a post-DH Snarry story. What a better way to start it off than this (for me anyway)? LOL But I'd hate for people to say "WTF?? This was supposed to be a one shot!" LOL

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Well, I am really thinking of continuing it because I'd like to have a post-DH Snarry story. What a better way to start it off than this (for me anyway)? LOL But I'd hate for people to say "WTF?? This was supposed to be a one shot!" LOL

Thanks!

10/10

beaweasley2

Very nice. I loved the simplicity and heart felt expression of this turn of events. Especially that the epologue was nothing more than a dream. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Thanks, my dear. :)

10/10

Eva_Snape

That would be nice, if Severus could have some peace at last.  Tthat is all I really want for him, to find some peace.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Me too. Definitely. Thank you.

0/10

kimbee73

What a wonderful alternate ending!

10/10

firefly124

I like this a lot, especially the EWE turning out to be a dream.  Have you any plans to continue it?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Probably, I won't, but you never know. :) Teehee Thank you for reading.

10/10

sregner

You wonder why JKR wrote a character with such depth as Severus and then let him die in such a meaningless way.  But it was always about Harry (which is fine too).  Thanks for the story!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

I've often wondered the same thing since reading! THank you.

10/10

amsev

Oooh, I love this story. More, please, if you feel so moved?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Thanks! Possibly. I'm not certain though.

0/10

FruGal

Yes! Another way for Snape to survive DH. And "19 years later" is a dream. Better than Bobby stepping out of the shower on "Dallas." A sequel would be nice if it't not snarry.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

LOL Yep! Grin. Not sure about a sequel.

10/10

blue artemis

Only Harry would think that kidnapping is a good way to get his life back on track.  I like it. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Teehee! Thanks

10/10

pansycat

I really like this story. I know it says that is complete but you could turn this into a longer story!(hint,hint:)..)Catharine

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

~will think about something for it~ thanks :)

9/10

JoKK2

What a delightful alternative.  I liked the way you worked it out. I also appreciate your Minerva comments.  After all those years of being his professor and colleague I didn't want their last exchanges to be ones of hate.  I see that this is a one shot but I hope you rethink that and maybe write a sequel.  After Harry helps Severus get back on his feet does Harry then try and fulfill that dream he saw?  I would be interested in your take on the future.  Thanks for sharing this story.  It was very good. JoAnne

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

I agree. I'm sure McG is definitely feeling a little guilty over her words. It's not her fault, though, since she didn't know. :) I'll consider writing a little something more. Thank you.

0/10

Lady Whitehart

I never thought I'd read a believeable Resurrected!Snape story, and then you go and prove me wrong. Thanks! *hugs*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Yay! Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

Hypnobarb

Thank you for giving us an alternative to the Deathly Hallows Screws the Half Blood Prince.  I like your ending much much better!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

You're very welcome! He does get screwed in canon, doesn't he? Damn it! :( LOL

10/10

Soul Bound

Wonderful! Thanks so much! :-D I love that that tremendously stupid epilogue was a dream, and I'm so glad that Harry has realized that that is not the life he wants.  I'd even love to see some sort of sequel covering the time they spend together in Grimmauld Place in more... depth. ;)  Brilliantly done, once again! *hugs you*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Epilogue? What Epilogue?EWE!!!LOLI'm so happy you liked it. ~hugs tightly~ I know you'd like some "action," but it didn't have a place in the story. Howeve, things get busy over at Grimmauld Place eventually. Bwahahahaha

Response from Soul Bound (Reviewer)

lol! Yes, action indeed.  I'll just be imagining what happens once Severus realizes that Lily's son has his own... qualities to be thinking of. :D

0/10

elsolel

Very cool.  I like that Harry decided to act on his own, with minimal prompting. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Thank you. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

Thank you. :)

0/10

RedOrchid

Another story by you that I really like. It's interesting with a Harry/Snape story where you feel that they might actually be able to become friends. Very good.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

THank you.:) I'm glad you liked it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

THank you.:) I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

harrypotterwanter

And maybe Snape then falls in love with Hermione and lives happily ever after? *grins* I enjoy the thoughts you have given to Harry. I do think that he would have helped Severus in the end if he could have, after he learned the truth.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

I think he would have as well. ~pets Harry~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

I think he would have as well. ~pets Harry~

10/10

JIMBOPATTERSON

REALLY GOOD. YOUR DIFFERENT TAKE IS MUCH BETTER TO ME. LOVE THE ENDING, ER "PAUSE".. HOPE YOU DO DECIDE TO DO ANOTHER CHAPTER (OR 50)?? BUNCHES OF HUGS & CHOC. FROGS! JIM

P.S LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES I HAVE READ SO FAR. SO MAY STORIES, SO LITTLE TIME! JIM

P.P.S 5+++++++++++ STARS! JIM

10/10

pookah

Very sweet- we need more 'Snape lives' stories.  Thanks.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of A Better Decision)

I agree!!! thank you

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