Bravo!

Oh, my God. I am absolutely speechless. That was beautiful. I'll be watching for more from you!

very interesting take on this scene. it was nice to imagine snape having an active and heroic role in the final battle - as i certainly had expected that he would prior to reading dh! well done.

This is an interesting take on the final showdown in DH. Well written.

This is an interesting take on the final showdown in DH. Well written.

I love this scene of the final battle, and Snape being able to confront Voldemort!

::bows head in respect::  Well done.  I am impressed by this story.

fascinating interpretation of that scene

I loved this, but I was really hoping to see where Snape would move on to. I really love the idea of Severus returning in some form to help them with the battle, to give that last bit of himself to the cause. Very well written, thanks for sharing!

Interesting, wonderful tale.  I never thought that Snape would want his love of Lily spoken of like that, but you've given that idea a plausible reason.  And done a great job mixing your own ideas and JKR's.