Under Her Spell
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veradeeSeverus has been enchanted by a smile.
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters in this fan fiction are copyrighted by J K Rowling, but this specific story is entirely mine. It has been written for fun only, and I do not make any money out of it. Nevertheless, the story should not be reproduced without seeking my permission first.
Many thanks go to my beta, Beth Kennedy.
This story was written for the Marauder's Map Challenge at the LJ community "Romancing Wizard".
Under Her Spell
A story by veradee
His Transfiguration homework on the table in front of him forgotten, Severus sat on a sofa in the common room. He was surrounded by his housemates, but was oblivious of them.
Instead, he saw Rabastan Lestrange, who had suddenly sprouted fur on his face and on the backs of his hands in today's class. And then he heard it, the melody he loved: her low voice.
Of course, it had been the handiwork of Potter and his sidekicks. How he hated them and their pranks. Always causing trouble, never considering whether they hurt someone.
Not that Severus worried about Lestrange. No, Lestrange knew how to defend himself.
But she was not as tough as that. He had seen the disappointment in her eyes when Potter's gang made her and their house look bad again.
It had taken all of his self-restraint not to jinx them with a toenail-growing hex.
Just thinking about them now made him grip his wand until his fingers turned numb.
But, of course, she would have been even more disappointed if he had followed his impulse, and he did not want to see her sad.
No, he wanted to see her smiling.
He knew he should not like her with her being a Gryffindor. But how could anyone resist her smile? True, it was rare, but it was the sweetest thing he had ever seen.
Sometimes she even smiled at him. Not many people did.
With a flick of her wand, she had vanished the fur from Lestrange's face and hands. Everything she did appeared effortless, graceful.
She had been dangerously calm when she docked a total of 80 house points from the four no-goods. "One week detention for each of you," she had added, almost whispering.
Someone who did not know her so well might not have realised how incensed she actually had been. But Severus had not missed that her lovely voice had taken on the harsher Scottish brogue of her origin as it tended to do when she was angry.
He looked down at his homework. "Switching Spells and the Danger of Instability," the title read. He wanted to do well again. The O.W.L.s were still half a year away, but he had already started to study. For her.
Below his last essay she had written an "O" for the first time ever after four years of "E's." It almost was as if she had sent him a love letter.
He kept the parchment under his pillow, and each night before he went to sleep, he fetched it to trace her neat writing with his finger.
Minerva.
The name suited her so well. When he was lying in his bed, he sometimes whispered it in the dark, imagining that he could address her by her first name.
He sighed.
"Snape, stop daydreaming," he suddenly heard someone say. Looking up, he saw Evan Rosier sneering at him. "Help us with that essay for the old maid instead."
Severus balled his fists.
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4 Reviews | 7.5/10 Average
First off. let me say that this is a very well written and enjoyable story. I don't normally read Snape/Minerva stories (I'm a die hard Albus/Minerva shipper) but I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I only found it because someone recommended it to me. I really like the way we see everything from Snape's point of view. I find it's always interesting to get into someone else's head and see/hear their thoughts. And I can easily see Snape having those sort of feelings for Minerva in his younger days. Very well done and I enjoyed it! Thanks,Ang
Response from veradee (Author of Under Her Spell)
A recommendation? Wow, that's nice to know. Thank you so much for letting me know that you enjoyed it.
There was something utterly adorable about this fic. I love both your Minerva as seen through Severus's eyes and Severus himself. I'm glad I've been hunting through some older stories for things to read, or I'd never have found this little gem.(I especially loved his thoguths on getting the "O" after four Es.)
Response from veradee (Author of Under Her Spell)
I'm also glad that you've been looking for some older stories. Thank you for your lovely review.
Aww! Again, very cute!
Response from veradee (Author of Under Her Spell)
Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I'm very happy that you enjoyed them all.
Absolutely loved this story - very well written, great plot line, and excellently executed!
Response from veradee (Author of Under Her Spell)
Having just received a review on one on my other stories, I now see that you commented on this one. I'm convinced that I never got notified and am very sorry that I didn't reply when you posted your review. So, a very belated but nonetheless very enthusiastic "Thank you" for your very nice words.
Response from diana_hawthorne (Reviewer)
Not a problem!
Response from veradee (Author of Under Her Spell)
Having just received a review on one on my other stories, I now see that you commented on this one. I'm convinced that I never got notified and am very sorry that I didn't reply when you posted your review. So, a very belated but nonetheless very enthusiastic "Thank you" for your very nice words.
Response from diana_hawthorne (Reviewer)
Not a problem!