Chapter Thirty-Four — Uncovered
Chapter 34 of 59
FaradayObfuscation can only last for so long.
ReviewedSnape looked at the small velvet bag that Folter had in her slender hands.
"When?" he asked.
The house-elf gave the question a seemingly unnecessary amount of thought. "About two hours ago, Professor."
That would make it right after he had verbally ejected Lupin from his private workroom. He'd spent just over an hour attending to some marking and then the better part of another hour attempting to eat a six-foot diameter food clearance at the staff table in the Great Hall at dinner. McGonagall had made several comments about intestinal worms that he'd pointedly ignored. They both knew he'd deliberately knocked her drink onto her lap as he haughtily left the table.
Snape blinked at the pouch that Folter was still holding out to him. "No message?"
Folter shook her head. "No, Professor." She placed the pouch in his outstretched hand, the contents making a sound like the dulled chime of a small bell. The house-elf padded away into the shadows to attend to... whatever it was she felt she had to attend to.
Snape stood in front of the closed door of his personal quarters, having been presented with this familiar item as soon as he had entered. The manner by which Folter had proffered it to him suggested an urgency that the lack of an accompanying message made somewhat mystifying.
He hadn't seen it for weeks but recognised it immediately as the pouch that Dumbledore had given him to carry to Lupin. That there was a connection between it and Parr had been obvious, but what it represented was much less so. Perhaps now would be the time to deduce its purpose, and since Lupin had left no instructions denying him anything, Snape saw no reason for that not to be the case.
He sat down in his reading chair and began to unfasten the pouch strings. His hands paused. Dumbledore had said that it was important that he neither looked at nor lost the contents. Could they be charmed or even cursed? He mulled over this possibility for a few moments. Lupin could be nasty if the phase of the moon was right, but it was not in his nature, so to leave no warning of a curse was very out of character unless the curse was something mild, in which case the werewolf might have left it for Snape to discover himself as retribution for getting booted out of the dungeons.
Snape judiciously decided that caution was warranted. He placed the pouch on the floor in front of him, took out his wand and used magic to extract the contents. The jointed metal slid out of the pouch sinuously, light flickering along the links and throwing a refracted glittering along the walls. A shard of its cold brilliance fell across the tiny bamboo cage hanging in the corner of the room, and the birds inside let out a tinkling burst of notes...their first since being moved from the Owlery to their current location, perhaps their first since their former owner had died. One of the birds fluffed its feathers, as if waking from a long sleep. A single oval feather was shifted loose, turning solid as soon as it left the bird's body, dropping to the floor below the cage with a metallic clink.
Snape returned his gaze to the object suspended in front of him, a length of chain still partly contained within the pouch. He raised it higher and the chain slithered free. Turning it in order to get a clear look at it, it took him a few moments to work out what it was. The metal was silver-like, but with a reddish sheen that appeared when the light hit it at a certain angle. The links between the inch-long panels were exquisitely-wrought with an almost Goblin-like skill, the fine filigree pattern on the panels twisting and curving like an orchestrated riot of vines. The clasps joined the two ends of the length of panels with a snick, the trailing chain, its length as long as Snape's arm, so thin and delicate that the slightest pull on it would surely separate it from the whole.
A collar and leash.
"I know you are here."
He tried not to breathe, lest the slightest movement give him away.
The shadow passed not two feet in front of him, the flat profile sharp against the fingers of sun that stole through the cracks in the boarded-up window. The light was full, the pale green of spring powdered through it, warm and soft.
"I will find you," the high voice promised. At first it had sounded faintly amused, as if it had been a childish game that would see him lose in a sufficiently brief time frame. Now it was beginning to sound angry, and its movements around the doorless room becoming more erratic as if to catch him out of his hiding place.
He was standing in full view, pressed flat against the wall opposite the window, but the figure kept moving straight past him as if he were invisible. His eyes tracked it as it paced restlessly back and forth.
"Where are you hiding, Severus?" Back to the deceptively calm tone of voice. The figure stopped, turning its head as if to try and catch the slightest sound that would betray him. "It is rude to bring me here and then hide from me."
He frowned. The figure's smooth head twitched as if it had detected his change of expression. It drifted a few feet to one side and stopped.
He saw it again, that peculiar, rippling distortion behind the figure, almost like the wavering of convection currents. It bowed and bent the view of the room behind it, an amorphous ghost following Death.
A long-fingered hand raised, the spidery digits splayed apart, middle finger questing as if to feel the texture of the still, heavy air. The head turned, bringing the red eyes around to face him, passing over him. Death drifted towards him slowly, hand moving through the air with an almost dance-like grace.
"I know you are here," it repeated in a caressing whisper like a lover's sigh. The hand moved closer to him, less than an arm's length away. Automatically he pressed his back even harder into the wall, knowing he could not move aside, for to do so would mark his location beyond a shadow of a doubt.
The middle finger hooked in the air, and Death stopped still. "Ah." Needle-thin teeth glittered inside the lipless mouth. "I see now." The other hand came up to search through the gossamer threads he could not perceive. Death took a step closer. "I should be outraged at you, Severus. Hell hath no fury." A dry, sharp laugh, as bitter as pith. "Do you want to make me jealous? Is that it?" The hands wove in front of him...elegant, delicate, deadly. Forked tongue flickered. Another step closer. The rippling distortion thickened, swelling behind Death like a promise of violence. The hands stopped moving. A hissing intake of breath. "She cannot hide you forever." Death drew back a reluctant pace, face twisted in frustration. "You cannot court me and then refuse me!" Another pace back as if stung. "I will have you!" Death roared at him, slashing at the air with clawed, poisonous hands.
The air congealed.
The room swelled.
The floor dropped away, down to oblivion.
His heart squeezed itself flat as Death shrieked at him. "You promised me!"
Death has nasty temper, Snape thought to himself as he shivered in the dark.
The rangy man continued to twitch. Having the Teverington Striker so close to him was no doubt the reason for it. Most would have found the muddy green eyes disturbing from across a room, let alone having them trained on them from a hand-span away.
"Gone where?" Macnair repeated a little more harshly.
The werewolf flinched, desperately trying not to look at the man who loomed over him. "I... ah... we think that... perhaps she was taken away."
Macnair cast a brief glance over to the huddled crowd in the corner of the room, bodies curved inward, shoulder to shoulder, flicking anxious looks up at him, feet shuffling, like animals in a slaughter pen.
He turned his attention back to the sorry excuse in front of him. "Taken by whom?"
The werewolf started to gasp for breath like an asthmatic and began to back away. The Striker's hand shot out and grabbed the man's filthy shirt, holding him in place. A rumble like the juddering start of an avalanche rose from his throat. The werewolf let out a high yelp, eyes so wide it looked like they were about to fall from his skull.
"Lupin! Remus Lupin!" he cried, shying away, eyes squinted close against the blow he was sure would descend on him.
A tic started up below Macnair's left eye. "Lupin was here?"
"Yes!"
"When?"
The werewolf didn't answer, still straining away from the Striker's anchoring grip, his body shaking and his flared nostrils white.
"When?" Macnair repeated, his grip on his wand tightening.
The Striker flexed his arm slowly, dragging the werewolf closer to him, worn shoes scraping across the concrete.
"Last... last week!" the werewolf replied, jaw clenched, pulling harder against his captor's grip.
Macnair's moustache twitched like a small rat that had been jabbed with a fork. "Last week? And you waited until now to tell me?"
The werewolf struggled like a sheep tied to a stake, feet scrabbling uselessly for purchase on the floor. "But I had no way of..."
"Drop him," Macnair told the Striker. The man pulled down on the werewolf's shirt, bringing him painfully to his knees before letting go of his clothing.
"Crucio!"
The werewolf screamed, his malnourished body twisting painfully and spasmodically. The den members in the corner surged in fright, each pushing another in front of them as if to shield themselves from oncoming punishment.
The Striker tipped his head to one side, watching the man contort in front of him as if it were a curiosity on display at a museum. His heavy, dreadlocked hair swung with the movement, and he scratched the tip of his wide nose calmly.
Macnair ended the curse.
The wretched figure on the floor trembled, blood leaking from his mouth where he had bitten through his tongue. His hands clenched and unclenched erratically, the muscles in his body contracting violently in the aftermath. The other lyc-males panted and rolled their eyes in terror.
"It was made very clear to you that secrecy was of the utmost importance," said Macnair coldly.
The cowed man on the floor coughed and spat a clot of congealing blood out of his mouth. His hand crept towards Macnair's foot.
"Please," he pleaded. "We never told Lupin anything. I swear it."
The Striker brought his heavy boot down sharply on the man's wrist, the bones audibly crunching with the impact. The werewolf let out a miserable howl that made Macnair's teeth clench.
"She will tell him, idiot!" the wizard hissed, spittle flicking from his mouth.
Someone in the corner moaned. Macnair's head turned toward the cowering group.
"Farring?"
A shadow formed behind him. "Yes?"
"Kill two of them." Macnair looked down at the sobbing figure sprawled on the floor in front of him. "This one's mine."
She had patience. When it suited her, of course, which was rarely. Most would have been shifting their feet and fidgeting by now, but Parr stood, unmoving, statue-like, giving every appearance of not being bothered in the slightest.
Snape continued his marking with brows slightly raised to radiate an air of insouciance, but he was curious to see how much longer she'd wait. It had already been over an hour, and he could very easily make it another. This was a perfect opportunity for a power play, and he was going to wring it dry for everything he could get.
She'd caught him off guard as he'd left his private quarters that morning, standing opposite the door in very much the same way she was standing in his classroom now.
He'd stared at her, expecting some form of explanation and wondering how she'd known where his private quarters were. The silence stretched out until even he was uncomfortable.
"Go away," he'd instructed and walked off.
The reprieve from her presence had only lasted until the end of the final lesson that afternoon. One moment the classroom was empty. The next she had appeared, not one sound made to give her away, but he'd known almost the second she had arrived. It was like a nuzzling itch somewhere in the front of his mind that made him aware he wasn't alone.
They'd stared at each other, both blank-faced until Snape had shaken his head slightly and dismissed her from his attention to refocus on his marking.
An hour passed, excruciating, cold, silent.
He pushed aside the last parchment with a sigh and stood up, fixing a tired expression on his face. Parr watched him flow from his desk down to where she stood. He squinted at her as if she were a particularly difficult problem, which wasn't that far from the truth.
"A mental propriety?"
She blinked at him.
"Your manners are so appalling I'd be surprised if you even knew how to spell the word."
Parr opened her mouth. "M... a... n......"
"Spare me, Miss Parr. I'm beginning to realise that are many things you know but choose not to utilise." He circled her slowly, the hem of his robe dragging across the top of her boots, along the length and around the heel. "Why do you perform to a substandard level in my class?"
"There are some things I do not have an affinity for, Professor," she replied calmly, her gaze fixed forward.
"I am acutely aware of that," he mentioned snidely, circling her again, one hand raised to his chest, the thumb toying with one of his buttons lightly. "However, I am also aware that you are deliberately working below your capacity in my subject, and I want to know why."
Parr's head rotated slightly as he passed behind her a second time, closer than before so that his arm brushed her back. She remained silent.
"For someone with no magical ability, you have a surprising adeptness at and knowledge of a field where you should have none."
"My mother was..."
"A horticulturist and a Healer; yes, I know," Snape interrupted her. "That is not sufficient reason. Nor is tutelage under Marconi Fulgor. He may be highly skilled, but it takes more than six months to gain the ability that you're trying to hide." He ended his circling and stood in front of her again. "It doesn't fool me. If I see you doing it again, I will refuse to teach you at all."
She looked up at him with her grey eyes and a hint of colour high on her cheeks, confirming his suspicions.
"While in my class you will give me everything you have. Anything less I will consider insulting."
"Yes, Professor." The blush in her face increased.
So, she thought she'd managed to hoodwink him, did she? "I also do not appreciate you pushing second-hand hunger on to me." Her eyes widened at that and her mouth opened slightly. "You spout a lot of hot air about mental etiquette, but it appears very one-sided to me. I wonder what else you're doing under the illusion that it's not being detected."
Uncertainty flickered across her face and her breathing quickened. Her irises contracted sharply and then relaxed back open, the pupils wider than before, the misted line across the surface of her left eye flirting with the edge of the aperture.
"Do not use me. You will have to support your Handler alone."
The colour drained from her face. "How do you..."
"Ah, not as sly as you thought you were, Miss Parr," he breathed, the taint of a nasty smile on his face. "One would suspect that you are attempting to disguise how much you know about the wizarding world." Her nostrils flared, her anxiety increasing. He leaned closer to her, peering into her face as if to read the secrets behind her slate eyes, studying her reaction to his proximity. "Hmm," he mused gently. He'd only have to take a step closer to her to put them both in nearly the same position they'd been in his dream. That thought sent a curious thrill through him. It was unlikely she'd dare it, but he wondered what her response would be if she looked into his thoughts and saw the image of his hands splayed over her behind and his tongue running hungrily along her mouth. He was almost tempted to push it into her mind, but the possibility it would end in him being brutally castrated stopped him.
"Lupin is under the impression I will make you perform some degrading task as part of your punishment." His mouth twisted into a sneer. "I confess that the idea has merit." He circled her again, the length of his teaching robes wrapping loosely around her ankles, the fabric slipping sinuously across the leather. "I have a slew of things that I could make you do that would have him chewing his tongue in outrage, but then..." He paused. "... the man always was rather prudish. Personally, I cannot wait to see you on your knees before me, and since Lupin tells me there is nothing you will refuse me, I have every intention of using you in whatever manner I choose." He stopped behind her and turned so that he could curve his body down over hers, his mouth close to her ear. "And let me tell you, Miss Parr, it's going to be dirty and hard and exhausting, and I will love every minute of it." The urge to tear her clothing away from her neck and sink his teeth into her was so powerful it made his hands clench and shake, the scent of her locking a bittersweet, steel hunger into his groin that was almost fierce in its intensity. One inch closer and his tongue would slide along the arc of her ear. He opened his mouth and breathed her in and out with a sigh, his hair slipping forward across his face. One centimetre nearer and he'd know if she tasted as delicious as she smelled. It was by pure will alone he didn't twist his fingers into her hair or slide them up the front of her body. One millimetre between dream and reality, speculation and actuality, thought and deed. "Go fetch your toothbrush, Striker," he whispered. "This floor is disgusting, and you'll be spending all night cleaning it while I watch you."
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135 Reviews | 5.6/10 Average
An excellent encounter Lucius - Severus! Usually Licius is depicted as the stronger one, but this is refreshingly different and wonderfully elaborated. Severus so enjoys annoying the aristocrat with working-class manners. And he doesn't reveal anything at all.
I love this story! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thanks so much! I confess that the next chapter is taking me ages to sort out. Real life has expanded into a huge monster that takes up all my time, but I shall do my best.
Great story! I find it very original, and Snape is very well characterized. I wonder what he will do when/if he remembers where he saw the knives before (the dream, right?) And six hours seem too little time! I wonder what will happen... Please update soon!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thank you, I appreciate the review and the rating, and I apologise for both the time it took to respond, and the time it's taking me to get the next chapter done.Yes, Snape did see the knives in the dream.
SOooo sensuous! I love!
“You’re supposed to use it for sex, not to drill a core sample through the tundra.” and “How would you like a sharp poke in the eye with my foot, Severus?” are the best lines ever. I am also really loving the exchanges between these three. Your dialogue is uproariously great at times, causing me to laugh aloud, especially the two examples above. Keep it up, I am loving it!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
The aggravation between these three characters seemed to work particularly well. In many ways, it wrote itself!
This is an impressively constructed, intriguing story! Excellent! I'm really enjoying your little hints and allusions!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thanks you very much for bother reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hope that you continue to do so.
You write beautifully. I am looking forward to their little adventure. And I can't wait until he saves the Handler. But I'm still worried about those other women who pop up every now and then. And what about this little girl...she's got to play a part in here somewhere. I look forward to more. Thanks for the update.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
They're all threads. Some go nowhere, and others make a pattern. But which is which?
Nice fight scene. don't know why, but they have been my favorite bits from this series so far.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
They were fun to write.
Usually I have no taste for OC's/Snape pairings, or for OC's all together. Consider yourself lucky that you've charmed me with a truly original character so far! *g* Seriously. This might be the first fic I've read in over two years involving an OC. Enjoying the mystery.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Then I hope I don't disappoint! Parr's not the most well-behaved OC and for that some don't like her. Thanks for taking a chance on my fic - it's greatly appreciated.
Wow, I never would have though of Folter as a main character, but she's coming in as one. How does she have info? I want to know!I can't wait to see what Snape can do now that he knows he's a seevy and the options in life are opening up. But I'm worried about those women that he's run into, Hagrid's "friend."Anyway, great job. I look forward to the next update.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
One of the few advantages of taking a terribly long time to write chapters is that the story has a chance to grow along its own pathways. Folter's character has proved to be quite an important one, which I hadn't anticipated. I'd like to think the story is better for her presence.Glad you're still reading!
I love this story!! You are a wonderful writer!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I'm so glad you updated. I needed a fix pretty bad and when I got on, your story was here to save me! I am exicited to see where this goes. I still have so many questions. For every answer you give, I find myself wondering more and more (in a good way). Keep the chapters coming!
this is scary!
Oh, the story continues...I always wish there were more to each chapter. I am still stumped on so many things. But you leave me quite intrigued. I look forward to another installment.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thanks for reviewing!I'm going to try and answer a few questions next chapter.
Thank u for the update, another puzzle to work over - just what has she done in untying the knot - has she tied another between them? love your story
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate the time you take to review.The next chapter will give you a few answers, but of course, not all!
O rly?I do wonder what that last bit was about!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Let us say an unintentional Side-along Eroticisation.
who's sycorax?this is fantastic fantastic FANTASTIC!!! i can't wait for more!! you just keep blowing my mind again and again and again!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
I'm glad you're still enjoying the story!Sycorax is the witch from Shakespeare's 'The Tempest'.
As convoluted as this story can get sometimes, and this chapter was one of the most convoluted, still I enjoy it. What an interesting chapter! I think this is finally a turning point in Snape's and Parr's relationship - perhaps they'll like and trust each other a little more now. But please, I hope something happens with Parr's Handler soon.
my god my god my god. I think I'm going to cry. this is fantastic. I mean, I mean, if this wasn't fanfiction, you should publish this. or maybe I'm just overly emotional. but I don't think so.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thank you. Alas, I've told my story in someone else's world, but without it, this story would never have been.
WHAT a chapter. I am almost speechless. The confrontation between Lupin and Snape in the dungeon was perfect, and as for Chara and Snape in the sodden, lightening-struck grounds - that was an exceptional chapter. Well done. More soon! Please!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thanks for such a lovely review! I hope to do a bit of writing on the next chapter this weekend, but often I can never predict when the time is right to do it. We'll see!
It's all starting to come together. I cannot wait to see what happens. You do a great job at keeping the tension high! I am addicted.I find this whole facinating. You've done a great job creating a whole new world out of JKR's existing one.I always love your updates. Keep them coming.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thanks! Should be another one along very soon.
THANKS FOR THE NEW CHAPTERand the "christmas spirit" joke is fantastic. and the art ones.ooooohh!!! this is POWERFUL. I love it. I absolutley love it. it's been a while since I read the earlier part of this fic, and I can't remember if it was all this powerful...but I do remember that it was fabulous and I cannot wait for more!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thanks for the review.To be honest, the earlier chapters were much lighter. The story has aquired a gravitas I hadn't really expected. I still try to keep the humour, though.
I have been devouring this story at every spare moment possible for the past three or four days. I would grab fifteen minutes in the car as my husband drove on my blackberry. I would stay up late at night, tucked in to bed and reading by the light of my screen. I even passed up movie-time with my family on Christmas, just to get in one or two more chapters. I feel a bit barren, now that I have run out of chapters. The pace you have set at revealing the story's secrets is maddening, but in a most pleasurable way. Often times I'd find my hands fisted into my hair, snarling at the screen with confusion, only to be slowly eased into enlightenment throughout the chapter, to the point that when I reached the end I'd laugh at myself for ever doubting you, for ever having thought you wouldn't supply me with the information I needed.
Your story - the type, the style, the prose - is a rare thing in the world of fanfiction. I've never encountered a nonprofessional piece that strings the reader along quite like yours. This maddening feeling I have reminds me of the months I read and reread Stephen King's Dark Tower series. It's deliciously agonizing! Now, all the more so, being as this is a Work In Progress. I don't know how to adequately express just how enthralled I am. I would pay good money for this story so that I might read it over and over, and give it a deserving spot within my library. There are still so many unanswered questions, and probably questions I have yet to think of asking. Do you plan on answering them? I do so hope, as nothing leaves so noxious an aftertaste as an ambiguous author with a story of this caliber.
It has been a joy, reading all that you have currently posted. Your vocabulary sometimes has be running for a dictionary, but you are never so verbose that I grow weary from thinning the reference pages. This is a mature, intelligent piece that I cannot praise highly enough. Your characterization and balance of humor and darkness is just right, leaving me guffawing at one turn before seamlessly quickening my spirit the next. I do so hope that I will one day see the conclusion of this magnificent story, as so often great pieces find themselves abandoned. I look forward to the road before us - it seems we have many miles to go before that final chapter is posted, and I eagerly anticipate every turn and bend in that long road.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
This is one of the longest and most complimentary reviews I've ever received - thank you so much!Yes, my beta often half-jokes that I'm very adept at stringing things out! She claims I'll be 80 and saying "Just one more chapter!"I try not to leave too much unanswered, and if it hasn't been answered, it's usually because I do so further on down the track, and that there's a reason for witholding the information. However, I'm always more than happy to answer questions people have, as long as I don't feel it gives away any important piece of plot. I did think about putting a thread on the TPP forum for just such use, but my story isn't that widely read so it seemed a touch extravagant. So if you have any questions you can always e-mail me, or attach them in a review - I'll try not to be too evasive. And there's no way I'm NOT finishing the story! It just takes me a long time to get the chapters out.With luck and the grace of my beta and validation queue, there'll be another chapter before the end of the year.My thanks once again.
New chapter!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!
Lovedit...especially the end, this just gets better and better =)
thanks for the update!!!!!!
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Sorry it took so very long! I'm hoping to have another chapter out before the end of the year.
Oh you have not disappointed me! This was a great chapter. I loved the first scene. My favorite line: "He vacillated as Parr started listing euphemisms for illegal forms of copulation and Snape’s involvement in them."I was laughing so hard.I am intrigued to see what happens once Snape's mind is out in the open. Even though he's decided upon doing the exercise, I don't know how he'll handle having her see everything as she trains him to put up his guard.I wonder how Lupin will react if he were to find out. I think he'd be a bit miffed since he considers Parr his territory.Thanks for updating! I had sorely missed your story. I look forward to future posts.
Response from Faraday (Author of Orion's Pointer)
Thanks for the review! I'm estimating there'll be another chapter after Xmas but before New Year. It's half-done at the moment, so taking into account writing the rest, my beta checking it, the Xmas break, and the validation queue...