The Fine Print

Lady Apythia

6 Reviews | 8.17/10 (6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Humor Short Story 1,131 Words 1 Chapter Complete

It always pays to read the fine print, especially when dealing with a magical contract.

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Chapter 1: The Fine Print

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Lady Apythia

Member Since 2005 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 45 | 58 Reviews Written | 195 Review Responses

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10/10

pookah

Brilliant! This is so clever and funny! thanks for sharing it! I'm glad I looked up your page to see what all you'd written!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of The Fine Print)

Thank you so much!I am going to post some more original work once i am done with Equilibrium.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of The Fine Print)

Thank you so much!I am going to post some more original work once i am done with Equilibrium.

10/10

Dancingkatz

I absolutely loved this. I'm very glad your writer's group talked you into sending it out. I would be very interested in reading anything more you write about this character. I love her attitude and personality.

0/10

purpleygirl

This is a really interesting idea. Its style is a little like the book I, Lucifer -- although, with that, you expect the devil to curse and act nasty! *grin* This is an interesting spin, with the lead being a normally angellic fairy.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of The Fine Print)

Thanks for your comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read my story. I'll have to read "I, Lucifer"; I hadn't heard of that before.

9/10

ravine

I like it - very funny! Will be interested to see more.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of The Fine Print)

After all this time, I think I might have an idea on what to do with this. Perhaps this summer, I can coax my muse into helping me write a few chapters. Thank you for taking the time to read and respond; I appreciate it!

10/10

cenicienta

LOL Very funny. You're great! Love the character description, interactions and all the world of Fairies! TTU (two thumbs up)

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of The Fine Print)

Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave me such wonderful comments! I am so glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

Marti

Niiiiiice! I'd love to read more of this! Great potential with this story.marti

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of The Fine Print)

Thank you!

I haven't thought about it for years, but for some reason, this story has been in my mind the last month. I'm thinking about some plot ideas, and, hopefully after I take the GRE next month, I'll have some time to work on expanding it.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment; I appreciate it!

Apythia

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