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HogwartsHoney

10 Reviews   |   10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Drama Angst General post-HBP/HBP compliant Hogwarts Castle 3,595 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Severus Snape

Written for the Paintbrush & Quill project at Phoenix Rising, July 2007 with beautiful accompanying art by _odella_ included at the end. In the hours following Dumbledore's death, Severus Snape is once again at a critical point in his life as he ponders his future, and his past

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HogwartsHoney

Member Since 2006  |  23 Stories  |  Favorited by 37  |  147 Reviews Written  |  358 Review Responses

 

45 years old and hopelessly intrigued by the Potterverse and all that it contains. Really, I'm too old for this sh*t, but... here I am.

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9/10

kimjo2

you tied the five stages in beautifully.  thanks so much

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thank you! I appreciate your review. ~H

0/10

MMADfan

Very moving. In keeping with my own thoughts and hopes about why Severus acted as he did and the impact it must have had on him. And the artwork is really fantastic. Wish I had more to say . . . thanks!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! ;o)  I agree that _odella_ has done an incredible job with her artwork - it was so exciting to both share the storyline and her creative process!  ~HH

Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)

I actually wrote a drabble with Severus and Fawkes -- it's the first drabble in "Circadian Rhythm" -- if you'd like to look at it. Set the "morning after," so to speak. And the picture by odella is just . . . wow. Hope you let her know that people are liking it! :D

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Ooh! *goes off to read*

Yes, I do let odella know and I've also linked her to this page via email so if she has any responses I can type them in! 

10/10

ubiquirk

Very interesting exploration of the hours after HBP for Severus.  I was also fascinated by your use of Aberforth and the hints that he might be more important to the cause than we suspect.

As for the art, it is amazing.  I hope _odella_ reads these as well, or is there somewhere to drop her a line?

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thanks! Kudos to one of my betas, snapeophile, for suggesting Aberforth as the most likely person to use!

As for odella... you could try dropping a comment at her LiveJournal, but I'll also send her a link to this page.

Thanks for reading!~H

0/10

Donavon

I am in awe...your one off is simply brilliant!!I don't know whether to cry or laugh that their knowledge comes to truism.All I know it was a good one off, which made me think and ponder.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thanks,

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

! I truly enjoyed exploring the 'what if' of Severus' loyalties and the possibilities of his mental state after Dumbledore's death.  Thanks for reading! ~H

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I loved this when I first read it, and I remember wishing you'd write more. I'm such a greedy reader. Teehee

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Aww *grins*  Thanks ever so for all your help with it, you rapid-beta, you!  I have a Snupin in final beta now, and I'll post it up here hopefully next week!

Hugz! 

0/10

Kailin

This is utterly incredible.  Thanks so much for writing!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thank you for that wonderful review! ;o)~H

10/10

Maddie

Very moving; heartbreaking yet hopeful. Great illustration.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thanks! I'm very happy with it, and having _odella_ as an artist was SUCH a lucky thing! ;o)

0/10

DeeMichelle

aww ... what an interesting look into what might have been.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thanks, lovey!  *sigh*  Yes, I hope that Severus makes it through DH alive, or at least redeemed!

Response from DeeMichelle (Reviewer)

Me, too.  I believe in my heart that he will.  All signs lead to his redemption.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Fingers and toes crossed!!

9/10

sassy19

nicely done

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thank you!

~HH 

10/10

droxy

Excellent and art.   So very human is this fic.  A wonderful darma.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Indefensible)

Thanks, drox. Of course you know i was a helpless fangurl to odella during the creative process! ;o)  Appreciate your reading it and reviewing!

~Honey 

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