You Can Never Leave

JackieJLH

6 Reviews | 8.33/10 (6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Hogwarts Castle 2,022 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Name Withheld (surprise)

When the war is over, sometimes all that's left to do is survive.

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Chapter 1: You Can Never Leave

About JackieJLH

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JackieJLH

Member Since 2006 | 41 Stories | Favorited by 40 | 2 Reviews Written | 177 Review Responses

Eh, I'm too boring to have a proper bio.

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Reviews for You Can Never Leave

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10/10

mick42

I didn't think it was possible for me to ever write these words, poor Vernon my heart is breaking for him, for both of them.

10/10

ubiquirk

How hauntingly beautiful. These lines especially got me:

You love her, but you hate her, you hate her almost as much as you hate your son for leaving, and you hate him for failing, for leaving you to handle everything. But you hate yourself too, because you shouldn’t hate them.

Response from JackieJLH (Author of You Can Never Leave)

Thanks!! So glad you liked it.

0/10

Lothen

well, I thought it was Athur...

Nice twist, never would've expectet that! Very well written, because it really held me captive...

Good job!

Response from JackieJLH (Author of You Can Never Leave)

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

LOL. I was thinking of everyone under the sun, never expecting that. Good work!

Response from JackieJLH (Author of You Can Never Leave)

Thanks! *is evil*

10/10

mmhaq

To copy another review, WOW. I was thinking Ginny, Harry, but Vernon. Very good.

Response from JackieJLH (Author of You Can Never Leave)

Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

10/10

Lady Whitehart

*waves to Jackie*

Wow! This was very powerfully written, and I loved the surprise twist at the end.

Response from JackieJLH (Author of You Can Never Leave)

*waves back*Thanks! I'm glad the twist was actually a twist, and not apparent from the first paragraph. Lol.

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