Ride to Hogwarts
Chapter 4 of 5
HermioneWeasley1972Harry meets the Weasleys.
Harry stood there all alone
Not knowing what to do.
Then a kindly woman said
"Come, I will help you through."
This is my youngest son, Ron
He's in his first year, like you..
And to get through that wall
Here is what you have to do.
Make sure no one is watching
And just walk straight through there.
Might want to go at a bit of a run
If you are a little scared.
Harry walked through the wall
And was on the other side.
Scarlet red, upon the tracks -
The train he soon would ride.
He boarded the train, found a seat,
Soon hearing, “Do you mind?
The train is especially full today
And seats are hard to find.”
He shook his head and welcomed Ron
Who said, “I know who you are!
You're the famous Harry Potter
Would you let me see your scar?”
Chocolate frogs and Bertie's Beans
Meeting some boys and a girl
By the time the journey ended
Harry's mind was in a whirl.
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I think prefer this to the previous chapter, not because I got caught out reading it in HCR Poetry Class, either. It has a better rhythm, I think.
This is absolutely beautiful.
I am absolutely baffled why there are no reviews for this lovely piece. Cute, lovely and heartwarming! Oh, and not to forget original!
Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Night of Darkness)
Thank you so much ladyinthecloak. I'm having a little trouble with the next part of this - I know how I want the sorting to go but it's getting them to that point. Oh well. It will come to me.
I'm sorry I needed nudging from litc to review this (she has hard elbows, I'm sure I'm going to bruise).I thought this was an interesting start, and I fully intend to read the rest, but I have to get in the proper mood to read poetry or I tend to skim it and you deserve better than that :)