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Her and Him
Minstrel Elizabeth1 Review | 7.0/10 (1 Rating, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Sometimes we have no idea how important compassion is.
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Minstrel Elizabeth
Member Since 2007 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 21 Reviews Written | 1 Review Response
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I feel like this sets the scene for what could be a short story, but it's not quite there yet. I gather the girl staring at the man is a tennant, or daughter of the tennant of the man, but what happens from here? I could see all sorts of possibilities, but without a little more background information, it's hard. Why don't they have anywhere else to go? This all just raises a bunch of questions but gives no answers or even enough information about the situation to draw any real conclusions. It could be something really interresting with more work, I think. :-)
Response from Minstrel Elizabeth (Author of Her and Him)
Thanks for reviewing :) Actually it wasn't meant to give background or detail, not supposed to answer any question. It's just about how sometimes our subconscious works despite everything else. Just a weird thing I wrote one night. Actually typical for Russian early 20th century literature. :)