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Still a Prince

1: Complete short story

Still a Prince

Alison

5 Reviews   |   5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

General Hogwarts Castle 745 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Eileen (Prince) Snape Severus Snape

Ever wonder how Snape acquired his teenage title? Not Snivellus, the other one!

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Alison

Member Since 2006  |  42 Stories  |  Favorited by 26  |  8 Reviews Written  |  149 Review Responses

A published Aussie author for a number of years now, I decided to dabble in the waters of HP fanfic for the first time. I hope my stories are acceptable.

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10/10

Marion

Excellent!! Just as I always imagined that scene to be (no Abusive!Toby if you please! :)Loved your depiction of Eileen: neither too browbeaten nor too feisty, just a woman trying to make best of a difficult situation.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Nicely done. Good take on canon.

10/10

mistaria

I definitely like the idea that the hook nosed man is someone other than Tobias.Lovely little piece. :) There seriously needs to be more Eileen Prince/Tobias Snape related fics out there.

10/10

rainfromheaven

I liked it! I liked Eileen Prince's character, very much like Lily (motherly) and Narcissa (proud) combined. :)I also think you've got the young Snape in character. Quite surly, aware at a young age what it means to be a half-blood. I especially liked the last line. "Still a Prince." What a way to end! :)

Response from Alison (Author of Still a Prince)

Thank you for that! I was trying to make Eileen Prince come across, not so much a downtrodden little creature like Voldemort's mum, but instead as a woman who, due to circumstances beyond her control, was willing to put up with a lot to get what was needed, in this case, shelter and a magical education for her son. It occurred to me that we've only got Harry's interpretation of Snape's memory that the abusive man was Snape's father.  And I thought that often people resemble their grandparents just as much, and in some cases more, than their parents.  Plus I get a bit sick of all the "Snape's dad was abusive/alcoholic/etc."  So I decided to make the man instead his pureblood grandfather, ashamed of the halfblood in his family.I'm glad you liked the story.  Alison 

9/10

Lady Whitehart

I love your explanation of how Severus came up with the Half-Blood Prince.

Response from Alison (Author of Still a Prince)

Thanks for the comment; and I adore your cheering emoticon!Alison

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