Damnation

Celtic Spirit

2 Reviews | 3.5/10 (2 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Songfic Poetry: Free Form 107 Words 1 Chapter Complete

How do you feel, when who you love does not love you back?

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Chapter 1: Damnation

About Celtic Spirit

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Celtic Spirit

Member Since 2007 | 5 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 5 Reviews Written | 5 Review Responses

i'm a 22 year old portuguese young woman, who loves HP, Alan Rickman, David Thewlis among many others.

my favorite pairings are HG with about any one, though Snape gets the first place.

i like to write poetry, though it's usualy dark, like most of everything i do.
I also do art and jewelry and sell it too.

Author Website

www.midnightstudio.webs.com

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www.Celtic--spirit.deviantart.com

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7/10

Pennfana

Wow.

It's not just personal experience which helps me to understand your meaning here (though I must ask—shouldn't the last line read "Though I am not of your selection" instead of "Thou"?); you've done a good job of portraying the pain of unrequited love.

Overall, well said, and I hope that your pain will lessen soon.

Response from Celtic Spirit (Author of Damnation)

thank you, you are most kind.if my memory doesn't fail me i think that before "though" was used people wrote it "thou". and this has been betaed and she accepted.this was written some time back, thankfully the pain has gone way, though on certain days i still think back.Once again thank you for your review.

0/10

Lothen

That was really bittersweet, I liked it alot.

Thanks for sharing, I've felt this way for so long, and now I'm finally free to let go...

Response from Celtic Spirit (Author of Damnation)

Thank you

Response from Celtic Spirit (Author of Damnation)

you are most kind. i'm glad that my words could help you to move on.Your words mean a lot to me.Blessed Be Namäste

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