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One Last Effort

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4: Chapter 4

One Last Effort

Southern_Witch_69

29 Reviews   |   29 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )

Drama Romance Malfoy Manor 6,480 Words 4 Chapters Complete
Draco Malfoy Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley

Draco has been on the run for three years, but he finally finds safety with Hermione and her friends. Can they truly help him after all that's happened?

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4


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Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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0/10

Bettina

And we're not going to learn if the find the Horcrux? How unfair!
But the ending was quite a hopeful one on the private sector.

9/10

Bettina

Yep, yep, this is Draco. proud like a peacock, no matter what.
I'm positively surprised at Ron here, but three years are a long time.

10/10

jade2099

I love reading your stories Southern.  You do the characters justice in every piece!  :)  I really enjoyed this...I've found myself liking Dramione more and more...even though I'm still a Snape/Hermione all the way.  It's always interesting to see how Draco and Hermione come together, so to speak.  Fantastic! :)

0/10

sunny33

Trusting, ain't he? :)

0/10

carley9

Cute little story.  I liked the characterizations :)

0/10

sunny33

Yep.  Definitely hopeful! :)

0/10

sunny33

Oh dear.  They need their heads knocked together! :)

0/10

sunny33

A little softening on both their parts. :)

10/10

blue artemis

That is hopeful.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Thanks. :)

9/10

chyara

Update please!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

I was just thinking that I really need to upload the next chapter to this. I'll work on that. Sorry for the long wait.

10/10

ickle duddykins

Oh, you're so evil...I love it!Draco and Hermione make me happy :o) Well done with this, the plot is original, and I'm totally diggin' it.Thanks for the story,Sue.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

thanks! I'll have more up soon. :)

10/10

janis

Hermione made a bad decision there and I'm glad you let her make it.  When characters make mistakes like that it really adds to their depth.

More, please! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Thank you very much.

10/10

janis

You've definintely left me wanting more.  It's nice to see the trio a bit older and dealing with Draco on a more mature level than when they were in school.  Of course, the old behaviors are still there underneath, making your characters quite believable.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

thanks!

9/10

mmesnape

A pity shag? That is so wrong for so many reasons. And the fact that he didn't even bother to satisfy her, made it worse.  It really leaves a bad taste in one's mouth... I'm almost tempted to say 'poor Hermione', almost.  But I think that 'Dumb move, Hermione' would be more appropriate.  This was a very hard chapter to read, looking at how girls/women can lower their standards and accept a man's 'favors' to keep the peace.  Well written, hitting on a reality that does still exist.  Sadly...Hope to see more soon.  As always, cheers!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Very dumb move. I agree wholeheartedly. Sadly, many girls/women do this. I had a good friend back in high school who seemed to think that having sex with boys made them like her. She never understood that they were using her and then talking bad about her behind her back. :(  More up soon. THanks. :)

10/10

cocoachristy

Poor Hermione! By helping him, she hurt herself. I can't believe how much I like this fic because of the pairing, but I shouldn't be surprised--it is your writing! I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Thanks, doll. THat's a compliment. I know you don't like the pairing. Teehee. Sometimes we women can make some seriously bad decisions.

10/10

cocoachristy

I like this chapter. Emotions keep changing. Draco is nice one minute and an arse the next, keeping Hermione confused. Looking forward to the next!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Exactly. I'm building up for something that I hope is worthy. :)

10/10

Sir Catogans Bitch

I was just telling Sir Cadogan that he should bother Phineas Nigellus for visiting rights to Grimmauld Place so that he can watch things heat up between Draco and Hermione.

He agrees.  Plan on Sir Cadogan being witness for whatever you have in store for these youngsters. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

I certainly will, friend. And I do hope that he gives Phineas a hard time, as that man (portrait) is a right menace.

10/10

Sir Catogans Bitch

Sir Cadogan and I both think that Draco's at the end of his rope.  He'd probably accept help from anyone at this point.  Even that cowardly Potter fellow.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Is Catogen Sir Cadogan's evil twin? LOL Just kidding. Thanks! I'm with you on the Draco opinion by the way.

10/10

blue artemis

I am really enjoying this story.? Can't wait for the rest.?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Hey, thanks for reading. More up tomorrow. :)

10/10

togspled

mmmm... have we got some DM/HG going on here? Me likey, me likey... :)

hope the boys dont get too mad over half-naked Draco *drool* lol. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

They need Draco too much to get too pissy with him. Muahahaha

10/10

Soul Bound

You know I love it! :D  And I'm glad you didn't chop too much of his hair off. lol  I love the tension and I am looking forward to more angstiness.

Thanks, you're a babe! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

I appreciate your encouragement. I wanted to write something Draco and Hermione again, but I hadn't the time, what with all the hg/ss plot bunnies multiplying. LOL I like his hair this way as well. :)

10/10

mmesnape

A shirtless Malfoy and a blushing Granger... Hmm, sounds like a recipe for a little lip-play?  Smooching madness to come, I say.  LOL  Could be worse... Malfoy and Weasle? Looking forward to the next installement. Cheers!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

*nods* That's coming up next! :) (not Malfoy/Weasleby either... lol)

0/10

Cissy_n_Snape

Ah, I see my poor son is still on the run. He should have trusted Snape indeed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Ah, at least he's still alive.

10/10

mmesnape

Good beginning, nicely done too.  Yes, I agree that if he were on the run for so long, he would be more agreable and ready to accept their help.  But... and its a biggie, why have they been searching for him?  There has to be a good reason.  Looking forward to more details in the next chapter.  Cheers!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

Thank you. There won't be many details in the next chapter, but we do find out what they want from him. After that, I'll go into more detail.  Thank you for reading this. :)

10/10

Soul Bound

Oh, that was nice.  Thanks you, dear!  This is setting up to be just what the doctor(me) ordered! :P

And I like Draco's hair...

lol 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of One Last Effort)

I muck with his hair a little in the nex chapter, but I leave it mostly the same. teehee...

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