Chapter 02: Introducing Miss Eleanor Weatherhorn
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Nimue of the LakeProfessor Severus Snape is well known for his cold, hateful nature and when Harry Potter begins his first year at Hogwarts, Snape's temperment only becomes worse. However, he has strict orders from Dumbledore to keep from harassing The Boy Who Lived, so someone else has to take the fall and become the focus of his building rage. A young woman becomes the reciever of his abusive personality, but when tragedy strikes, it becomes apparent his cruelty had an unforeseen consequence.
ReviewedChapter 02: Introducing Miss Eleanor Weatherhorn
Eleanor Weatherhorn had believed from the start that her first day as a seventh-year would be the beginning of something special. When she started the morning, everything seemed to be going just right, much to her surprise. She looked quite nice, especially for a rushed job of quick glamours and no cosmetics. Her long brown hair still had a slightly ginger shimmer from the henna her mum had given her, and the nicely bronzed tan she had acquired at her aunt's in Egypt during the summer holiday made her look absolutely stunning. At least, that's what her friends told her. She practiced the flirtatious look her cousin had taught her and then decided it was time to head to the Great Hall for breakfast.
Much to her delight, her class schedule was entirely composed of courses she needed to qualify for the Assistant Healer position that Madam Pomfrey was offering the following year. Her friends Julie, Sandra, and Marta were also planning on becoming Healers, so the four would all be attending many of the same classes. The morning seemed to gather momentum towards perfection when Professor McGonagall came by to congratulate the four of them on the outstanding scores they had received in order to take the training course that St. Mungo's was offering on all the Saturdays during the fall term. Brandon DeLuc gave her a half smile over breakfast and looked away with red cheeks. Yes, today would indeed be a wonderful day.
A two and a half hour class in DADA was slightly boring, but at least this professor didn't seem terribly arrogant. At least he understood the material he was teaching. His turban was quite entertaining too.
Lunch came after DADA, and the Weasley twins were passing around a bag of confiscated candy they had pinched from Filch's office already. Eleanor grabbed out a few light blue cello-wrapped packets that had a flat disk-like tablet candy. She tried one and it tasted fairly good. Suddenly she began to giggle.
"The Hiccupping Giggles! Give those back to us, Ellie! We're going to Trelawney's next and those would be perfect!"
She giggled stupidly and handed them back to George, who grinned as he and his twin popped a couple in their mouths. Everyone at the table who was within listening range was laughing at her and she smiled sheepishly. At least they would wear off in the hour.
Flitwick seemed thrilled that a candy company was using a charm that he himself had come up with, so her sporadic laughter throughout the medicinal charms class after lunch only made him smile more. By the end of the class, the candies had seemed to lose their effect and she was glad because she was headed to Snape's lair. Study of Healing Potions would be the last class of the day, followed by an hour in the library to study and then dinner. As much as she hated being in the dungeons, she was practically jumping with excitement that she would finally be taking the study of healing potions course that she had been dying to attend for almost two years. This class alone guaranteed her position as an assistant Healer at Hogwarts.
Snipe was giving some boring lecture, waving his hand at a blackboard with writing on it when she felt something odd in the back of her throat. It felt almost like a cough, but more pleasant. Much to her surprise she let out a quick giggle.
The class went dead silent and she, along with the rest of the class, looked up at Snape, who was scanning everyone's face. She held deathly still, slightly because she still believed that rumour that Snape could sense fear. His eyes landed on hers, and she felt a certain dread as his lips curled into a vicious smile and he walked over to her table.
"Was there something I said to humor you, Miss Weatherhorn?" he said nastily, glaring down at her.
"Not at all, sir," she stuttered and another wave of giggles issued from her mouth. His smile broadened further, and he leaned close to her as her hands covered her mouth in horror. She could smell that he had eaten breaded chicken and an apple tart at lunch, and she almost began trembling at the realization he was far closer to her than he had ever been before.
"Ah, so you are laughing at me, I suppose?"
"No, sir!" she protested, but she began to giggle hysterically. Oh Merlin, why was this happening to her?!
His horrible smile was gone now, and he growled, "So you find me funny? Is it my appearance, Miss Weatherhorn?"
The other students were deathly quiet, and she was praying silently for help, even though she knew there was nothing they could do for her now.
"No, sir!" she said, tears beginning to form in her eyes. She felt like an idiot for giving the bastard one more reason to mock her, but she couldn't help it.
Though he was quiet when he spoke next, she was sure everyone in the class could hear it. "And yet you've laughed twice at my face."
"I--" she started but began to laugh again.
He leered at her and she cringed. She had never been this afraid before! Why the hell didn't he let her go already? He could just get it over with and dock the points,
then get on with the class.
"Well, I find it hard that someone looking like you do today would laugh about my appearance." He felt the sleeve of her robes with a finger and thumb and commented, "Tell me, Miss Weatherhorn, do you enjoy wearing these threadbare clothes year after year? I recognize these from your fifth year. You still have the stains from the oil of chamomile on the Hogwarts crest. Even the Weasleys managed to get new robes this. And yet you couldn't be bothered to get something that fits? I know you have the money to buy new robes, so obviously you aren't using your mental abilities to their full extent. Or do you like spending money of the cheap perfume I can smell? Or perhaps a book on quick glamours? Oh, yes, Miss Weatherhorn I can see through the glamour you've made to hide those acne scars that are on your chin. Obviously you couldn't be bothered to stop picking at them while they were trying to heal."
He paused to look around the room, and she glanced over at Julie, who was sitting next to her. She wished that there was something her friend would do or say to save her. Unfortunately for her though, she let out a muffled giggle again, and this time, as his predatory eyes turned back on her, she began to cry.
"Stop your crying you, pitiful child. It makes your complexion mottle, and I'm sure I'm not the only person here who finds your performance entirely unappealing. You are obviously trying to obtain the attention of your peers, but I can assure you they are not impressed--"
She let out another wild laugh and he shouted, "Miss Weatherhorn, I suggest you quit laughing before I send you to you head of house!!!"
"I can't!" she sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.
A goblet appeared on the table, filled with a blue liquid. "Drink," he commanded.
She contemplated for a moment if he had poisoned it, but now was not the time to further anger him. She gulped it down quickly, amid her tears, and set the goblet back down on the desk with a clatter.
"Now," he said, leaning forward, his hands on the desk and face just inches away from hers. "Get. OUT."
She jumped up, the tears still flowing. She grabbed her side bag and parchment and ran out the classroom door.
Her feet echoed through the dungeon corridors as she sprinted up stone stairs, trying to get away from that horrible bastard. Fuck Snape! How dare he! Her thought ran amuck as she brushed hair and tears out of her eyes, finally reaching the girl's bathroom in the main halls.
She was still sobbing miserably as she hid in one of the empty stalls. She couldn't believe that she had laughed like a complete idiot, suicidal idiot, to Snape like that. At least she wasn't laughing anymore; she privately wondered if she would ever want to laugh again.
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Dinner wasn't much better. She sat at the table eating the black forest cake Sandra had convinced the house-elves to give her. Her friends sympathized with her humiliation, and many of her fellow Gryffindor did too, but when Marta and Julie continued with their glaring at Snape, he docked them twenty points, which put them at negative 7.
"We'll get that bastard back; we promise," her friends vowed. She gave them a weak smile. They had a point; after all, how bad could having a class with him be?
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Will there be more?
Response from Nimue of the Lake (Author of A Fickle Heart)
Yes, there will be more. I had to move the story to fan fiction . net because I was having problems uploading here. My account is at http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1496225/ where I have uploaded a few more chapters and I'm working on the next!Thank you for the lovely reviews!!!
Response from Nimue of the Lake (Author of A Fickle Heart)
Yes, there will be more. I had to move the story to fan fiction . net because I was having problems uploading here. My account is at http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1496225/ where I have uploaded a few more chapters and I'm working on the next!Thank you for the lovely reviews!!!
Nasty piece of work, isn't he?
I like your start, hope you will update soon, weel done for keeping Snape in character,
xx
Why didn't the candy wear off?
I look foward to reading more of this story. But can't help but feel it should read A Pickled Heart...... hahaha
Kind of foolish of her to eat something she knew would get her into trouble. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Nice beginning! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Great start! I'm very intrigued to find out why, exactly, did Weatherhorn foolishly eat that candy before Snape's class? Can't wait to read the next segment-
Write On!
I am confused. The catagory of "Potions Under Duress" is supposed to be only Severus Snape and Hermione Granger stories. You do not have Hermione's name listed as a character for this story ... will it eventually shift its focus?
Response from Nimue of the Lake (Author of A Fickle Heart)
Oh, whoops. I was going to upload another one to Potions Under Duress. Thanks!