Hi again!  Thanks for all the nice comments about my various short fanfics!  Yes, I have a teenage daughter; but also I was the eldest daughter of four children, and my husband was the youngest of six, so I not only baby him, as well, but I have literally dozens of nieces and nephews to baby-sit. I always wanted a big family, but unfortunately have an auto-immune disease that usually makes you infertile (my daughter is a real little miracle!  No medical intervention, she just decided she was going to be born against the odds, and is now a happy, healthy teen!)Perhaps because of having such a maternal streak, I decided to go into pre-school teaching, so I've got around twenty kids per class!  Don't know what I'd do with myself if I wasn't surrounded by little childish voices all day!  And as you say, it's good for the writing to understand the way a 4 or 5 year old mind works!I'm glad you're enjoying my stories!  Have you read the Lily/Severus ones?  They're my favourite 'ship, and I've written a few!  I'd suggest "All Mine" as a start, it's my personal fave!Alison

I have to confess that LE/SS is my least favorite pairing. Please do not be offended if I slide on by those. Every time I think about this little one shot the hair on my arms stands up. Very well done you!! 

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked the story.Alison

Thank you!  You're the first person to comment on this story.  I got the idea from re-reading HBP where Remus came to Christmas at the Burrow and told Harry that his father had offended Fenrir Greyback.  It occurred to me then that no fanfic I'd read had ever looked at how Remus had become a werewolf, so I decided to rectify the situation!  I'm glad you liked the story.Alison