Loved it! Please write a sequel! :) 

I would very much like to see another chapter or two of this, it was delightful.

I enjoyed reading this so very much!  

Madame Goodsnatch....LOLOL!!!!

unusual and clever use of prompt.  cute story.  Thanks for writing and sharing your tale.

Bravo! Very fun short. Completely entertaining.

I loved it!  Hermione was more sneaky than any Slytherin especially with help from Severus,

*snickers*

At the beginning of this fic I could have sworn that it was Trewlaney in his bedroom under a polyjuice potion! Wonderful twists!

I smell a sequel to this one. OK I beg for a sequel to this one. Very well done Southern

I love your Malfoy here. :)   Malfoys should be evil, that's their charm.

That was a great story.

ooo Lucius thinks he can best snape and hermione now that he's brought them together? never!

Very twisty.  I like this better than a PWP.  Good show!Madam Goodsnatch, hehehehehehehehe...

Its all so very twisty. I like that LM thinks he can out think/plot the duo of Hermione and Snape. I think not!

impotence is the BEST punishment for that despicable git.  How can he ever expect to prevail against the brightest, most devious minds of Slytherin & Gryffindor together???  My only criticism of the story is that it doesn't have enough lemonage betw. Severus & Hermione. 

I liked this.? Lucius is fairly predictable.? ?But funny.?

Boy, you sure have Lucius character down with all his cunning and manipulation.  So Slytherin.  Impressive  how Lucius thought of them: "It would be much easier if they weren’t working together, but if they had worked out such an intricate plot to corner him in only a day of plotting together, they would become formidable foes over time, unassailable even."  Hermione and Severus better keep a look out..but then Severus is a good Slytherin too. Thanks for a good read.

Oh, SW, how I love your twistiness...and this story! 

V.entertaining......will you extend this challenge into a longer fic?......You have def got an interesting storyline...with hopefully lots of bunnies bouncing around....to torture us with a few cliffies!The thought of what Lucius would go through to try some oneupmanship on SS/HG is making me drool!...not even thinking of what they could retaliate with.....hmmmmm.Love the impotency potion for starters..hoho.Please extend this fic....?

V.entertaining......will you extend this challenge into a longer fic?......You have def got an interesting storyline...with hopefully lots of bunnies bouncing around....to torture us with a few cliffies!The thought of what Lucius would go through to try some oneupmanship on SS/HG is making me drool!...not even thinking of what they could retaliate with.....hmmmmm.Love the impotency potion for starters..hoho.Please extend this fic....?

*Giggle*that says it all really

Fantastique!

“Do you know, I believe I do,” he said.>>>SW, I have loved everything of yours that I have read, and this is no exception.  I have to tell you that this line made me laugh out loud.  It is *so* Lucius!I hope Lucius enjoys his time as a 3.5-inch floppy!

One could almost feel sorry for Lucius here at the end, but I guess I'm not a nice enough person. Convinced that he's rather thoroughly ...uh... fixed, I'll count this as a happy ending story and be content. I was vaguely surprised at first that you didn't have Severus tie Hermione to his bed to even the score but decided on second reading that that was probably part of the ~~~ at the end of the section. *wink* Thanks for the fun!

And will there be more plotting from the evil Lucius...