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Anastasia7 Reviews | 7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
Response to the "Runaway" challenge on the grangersnape100 LJ community.
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Anastasia
Member Since 2006 | 22 Stories | Favorited by 96 | 7 Reviews Written | 208 Review Responses
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Just revisiting to say congratulations on your SS/HG Awards nomination. It is well-deserved for the emotion you packed into just 100 words. Excellent!
Response from Anastasia (Author of Brittle)
Thank you very much for coming by again. I appreciate it. :)
The best type of drabbles, it makes the reader get invested, think about what's next, what was before... getting caught in the scene. A well earned nominatin, good luck with the awards.
Response from Anastasia (Author of Brittle)
Thank you. Drabbles are an exercise in brevity, so being the writer of an epic, I try to cram as much in as I can. :)
You do so much in so few words here. Breathtaking.
Response from Anastasia (Author of Brittle)
*smiles* Thanks. Much appreciated. :)
Amazing how much power you can pack into so few words... the atmosphere is perfect, and what you do with movement in silence and how much emotiona can be contained therein never ceases to amaze me.Two favorite lines: The desolate whisper of a robe's hem across stone. "desolate whisper" is perfection... and: His warm breath felt like home against her throat. I don't cry. I don't.Proud to know you.~ Ari
Response from Anastasia (Author of Brittle)
I am so very late with responses. That said, thank you as always. I don't see it sometimes... okay, a lot of the time, so thank you for never failing to point and say, "yes".*bows* Proud and blessed to know you.
Oh my! Its a perfect snapshot that makes the reader want more. Very compelling with such an economy of words. Congrats on your SSHG awards nomination!
Response from Anastasia (Author of Brittle)
Thank you so much. I'm surprised to see the response to it. :)