New Chapter for 25-Apr-05
25-Apr-05
ravine4 Reviews | 7.25/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
A brief image, reflection upon confronting reality
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ravine
Member Since 2006 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 12 Reviews Written | 21 Review Responses
Thirty-something single mom prone to bouts of binge thinking and suspended animation. HP fanatic, grad student, penultimate peon & word-geek extraordinaire.
Reviews for 25-Apr-05
dramatic and humerous--love it :]
I stopped by to read this... because this happens to be my birthday. Upon reading it, I am reminded of how I felt on my birthday in 2005. Short... but very insightful.~*~Selene~*~
Very striking. You haven't used many words, but the words you have used are very efficient.
Response from ravine (Author of 25-Apr-05)
Thanks for taking the time to read and review! I do strive for concise and clear images in poetry.
wow this really touched something for me. thanks for sharing.