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Island of Enchantment
SS Lupin4 Reviews | 7.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
A fluffy sequel of sorts to "My Own Worst Enemy," it is the story of a vacation Harry and Draco have in Puerto Rico which wasn't what they expected. First in The Island Trilogy.
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I liked it very much. I feel like going on holiday now. :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Island of Enchantment)
lol, so do I! *misses my suntan*Thanks for the review!
Cute story! I think I liked the first one better for the development of the characters, but this one was very good for the action and as a follow up. They're both quite good and I'm looking forward to the others you plan to write.
By the way, I noticed that togspled had a question about your Spanish. You merely had a typo. "Vámanos" is the imperative form and means "Let's go." It's definitely correct.
If you ever have any questions about Spanish grammar or spelling, feel free to email me. I grew up speaking Spanish and went to the University of Madrid.
And I had pernil asado, arroz amarillos, habichuelas y jugo de parcha for dinner tonight. Yum!
¡Cuídate!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Island of Enchantment)
*headdesk* And to think I plan on writing two more sequels in Puerto Rico... hopefully I can get the Spanish right in them. And if I don't, thanks for the offer. =]I also like the first story better, but the sequel is a nice bit of action-packed fluff, hehe. Pernil y arroz? *tries not to squee*Gracias por tu review.
Delish! I hope your muse continues to feed you these little tidbits.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Island of Enchantment)
Thank you! My muse was feeding me flan and arroz con pollo when I was in Puerto Rico over the summer, and I will hopefully finish this trilogy (which has other pairings). =]
Muy, muy bien.Tengo un poquito problema con su conjugacion de ir. Pienso que es: voy, vas, va, vamos, vais, van. Pero, te usas vamamos. Yo se la forma de vaminos, pero nunca oist`e vamamos. Quizas la hay en un dialogo diferente. No se.Menos de este, escritiste una fabula interasante. Me gusta mucho.Gracias.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Island of Enchantment)
Mi español no es muy bien, y creo que yo escuché la palabra mal. Ahora cambié a "vamonos." Mi madre es de Puerto Rico, pero yo nací y vivo en los Estados Unidos.I wish I could say the rest in Spanish, but there are probably errors in every sentence written above. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - this is my first Spanish review! =]
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
lol. you did pretty well. thats awesome to incorporate your family history into a story.