Smoking Kills
fyiagcg4 Reviews | 6.75/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Everyone says Smoking Kills.
So do lots of things.
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About fyiagcg
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fyiagcg
Member Since 2005 | 18 Stories | Favorited by 18 | 27 Reviews Written | 52 Review Responses
I was originally an SS/HG shipper that then fell in love with HG/DM as well. I now read and write both. I also have some original fiction and poetry up here on TPP, and love getting feedback on everything.
I have faced some writer's block on my only multi-chaptered story, but I PROMISE nothing is abandoned.
I do love to write, and I love REVIEWS!!
Ah, last thing. I am NOT HBP compliant. And now that I'm updating this profile in November 07, I need to tell you I am NOT DH Compliant
Reviews for Smoking Kills
I loved it.
I'm one of those who coughs when i smell cigarette smoke--I cant help it. Im not doing it to be obnoxious, it just gets really hard to breathe. I did enjoy hearing about a smoker's POV tho.
True story?
Response from fyiagcg (Author of Smoking Kills)
No, not a true story. Though the character is based on me (up until the dying part)... but my cousin died at 24 from brain tumors that had nothing to do with first/second-hand smoke.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
im sorry to hear about your cousin. the good die too young.
I found this quite funny: When complete strangers arrogantly told her that smoking could kill her, she would throw her cigarette on the ground and mash it out with the toe of her shoe, then thank them profusely for saving her life, gushing “My God, thank goodness you told me! I will never smoke again! Really, they should have warnings on the packages or something. If I had known it wasn’t healthy I never would have started!” She would shake their hands and brush away a stray, imaginable tear and thank them profusely for saving her life, turn, take a few steps, and then light up another cigarette. Very thought provoking.
I liked that a lot.
Terribly ironic. Good job, though! I like the way you wrote it. It's almost like someone is telling the story. It feels like spoken word. Again, great job. GG