Dangerous Respite
snapeophile7 Reviews | 7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
Drabble set in response to "Caught!" challenge on GS100. HG/SS enjoy a stolen moment together, unaware they are watched by a DE.
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oy. Creepy!
so powerful in so few words. thanks
Holy cats the hair on my arms is standing up! Well done you!
"She watched the way his sinuous hands added a touch of sugar to his espresso, stirring meditatively, as if he were adding ingredients to a simmering cauldron. " - I think this is my favourite line, it just brings me right into the scene!!
and the last two lines still give me shivers, 'phile. It's good stuff, and like all good writing, it leaves me wanting more!
Response from snapeophile (Author of Dangerous Respite)
Thank you, Honey! Your writing has influenced me to add a greater level of detail in my drabbles. (Hurry and tell Charmed that you've actually been a good influence on someone!) *snerk* 'phile
Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)
LOL. I wouldn't want to shatter her image!
Clearly it is time for us all to send a little Avada Kedavra to Mr. Goyle before he can carry out his little plan. Anyone want to join me?
Great drabble!
Response from snapeophile (Author of Dangerous Respite)
Wonderful idea,
Response from snapeophile (Author of Dangerous Respite)
. Count me in on the Avada'ing! Leave our two alone, I say. Thank you for the review!
I'm continually amazed by the ability of some drabbles to rouse such a strong emotional response. (because I'm crying).
Response from snapeophile (Author of Dangerous Respite)
Oh, my goodness,
Response from snapeophile (Author of Dangerous Respite)
--I thank you for review and kind words. I'm always conflicted when a reviewer lets me know they cried--gratified, in one sense, because I worked hard to include lots of emotions in the drabble, but also sorry
that I made you cry!
Oh, no! He musn't! Please say he doesn't! Great drabble. I found it very chilling at the end.