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ocean dream
dara st john1 Review | 10.0/10 (1 Rating, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
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A good presentation of opposites. But there are several attitudes towards opposites: reconciliation, choosing one over the other, one is essential to the existence of the other. My impression is that the poem depicts encompassing them. A nitpick is that the poem does not describe (the poet) coming to terms with this encompassing. I realize this nitpick may not be valid because of the near impossibility of introducing this dynamic element into a snapshot poem.