I've loved everything you've written so far... but if I may say so, I think this is your best. I love how you write with subtlety. I had to read it a couple times before I really grasped all the intricacies, but maybe I'm just slow. Work on “Fire” please.

This is completely brilliant!!  I don't think I've ever seen someone capture Bella's essence quite so perfectly.  You've rolled so many elements into the story: cruel humor, sarcasm and even devotion.  I am in awe.

Fascinating portrait of the evil Bella and with a truly twisty and chilling ending.

bella is very in character here, especially when she bites rodolphus. nice job!

What a marvelous one-shot!  I truly enjoyed this.  No grammatical mistakes and that was a pleasure, :).

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.  Well done!

~Julia~ 

Brrrr! Remind me never to mess with Bella, unless I can get a clear shot from behind her! This was scarey! Bellatrix at her "best," which is, by any normal standard, her worst! Well done!

(Hee-hee! I love the little bit of sisterly affection, in the midst of all that. That she'll poison Narcissa's mother-in-law, herself as a gift to the baby! That's SO Bellatrix!)

What a perfect Bellatrix. Nicely done. Thanks for posting.

oooh!  I like it.  Sometimes going into the mind of someone like Bella is ... satisfying.  *looks shifty and frantically waves Hufflepuff banner*

loved it! plus, any mention of NiN and Snape is exciting for me, as I think Trent Reznor and the potion's master share similar ...traits... :)