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City Soul

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Poetry/Prose Poetry: Free Form 82 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Wrote it on the greyhound when I was coming home. The "Sound?s Cold" line is a double reference to both the word sound and to a body of water. Can you guess where I live?

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Member Since 2005 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 1 | 13 Reviews Written | 19 Review Responses

I write alot of poetry, but look for some good ole smut as well. I tend to ship Hagrid/Tonks...I know, weird.

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9/10

Fairfield

Quite a number of good images. The poem could be a bit more self-contained--wish the double meaning of 'Sound' and the author coming home were evident from the poem itself.

Response from from_n_to_h (Author of City Soul)

Thanks for the review! Constructive crit is always appreciated. I did really struggle with how to make the double meaning of Sound obvious, but I just couldn't make it happen and keep the flow I liked.

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