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Choosing A Different Path

ancientgirl

20 Reviews   |   20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )

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Lucius Malfoy

Lucius makes a life changing decision. One-shot.

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Chapter 1: Choosing A Different Path


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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.

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0/10

EverMystique

very well written. I like the approach to this as Lucius' redemption.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you for your lovely review.  It was this story that prompted me to write A Tale of Two Men.

8/10

Bella Snape

Oh I hope he finds love with Hermione... next to Severus... Lucius is my second favourite man for Hermione to be with!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Me too, I love Lucius/Hermione stories.  However, I have someone else in store for Lucius. 

8/10

Satai Delenn

Wow Ancientgirl! Excellent as always!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you.  I'm very glad you enjoyed it.  I'm thinking about making a story out of this.  Nothing too long, but I've been thinking about a Lucius story for a while and I think I can use this as a base for that.

Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)

That would be cool! The more Lucius stories the better in my book!There just are NOT enough Lucius stories!

10/10

whimbley

Wow!  That was wonderful!  I do hope you'll consider making this more than a one shot.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

I'm glad you liked it.  I think I may certainly expand on this.

10/10

MagicAlly

Beautiful.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. 

10/10

Amethystique

Yippee! A new offering of yummyness from the pen of ancientgirl!  This just makes getting out of bed worthwhile.  Thankyou for more excellent literary art and maybe a sequel?  Or are you going to dangle the proverbial strawberry and leave it up to my *pathetic* imagination?  This is why I'm a reader and not a writer 'cos I've no imagination! Blessings  Lol ;)x

10/10

Amethystique

Yippee! A new offering of yummyness from the pen of ancientgirl!  This just makes getting out of bed worthwhile.  Thankyou for more excellent literary art and maybe a sequel?  Or are you going to dangle the proverbial strawberry and leave it up to my *pathetic* imagination?  This is why I'm a reader and not a writer 'cos I've no imagination! Blessings  Lol ;)x

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Hey there!  I'm glad you liked this.  I only meant for this to be a one-shot.  But, as I have told other reviewers I've been toying with a Lucius fic for over a year now.  I might make this into something longer.  I'll have to work a bit of a plot out, or at the very least figure out where I want to go with this.I won't do anything until I finish my current WIP, but I should have something up shortly after.  Keep your fingers crossed.

0/10

Donavon

An amazing one shot.  Thank you.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thanks for reading this.  I thought I should give Lucius a bit of attention.

10/10

Lyndie578

Interesting take in Lucius.  Good job!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you.  I like toying with the idea of Lucius turning things around and being one of the good guys.  LOL, especially since I don't see JKR doing it.  But, you never know.

9/10

JoKK2

Are you sure you this is only a one-shot?  Sounds like a good beginning to me.I really enjoyed it -- as I do your other stories.  Keep up the great work.  JoAnne

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Yeah, only a one shot.  But I won't say I might never do anything with it.  Like I told someone before, I've been toying with a Lucius fic for a long time now.  If I can think of anything significant I might use this as a base for something a little longer.Thank you for taking a moment to read this.  I always appreciate your reviews.

0/10

savvyjune

too bad this is a one-shot...it could be a really good story....it wouldn't have to be that long...6 or so chapters...what a great start though...but like i said....to bad its a one -shot...i loved it....keep up the good work......and get back to my other story...lol...

0/10

savvyjune

too bad this is a one-shot...it could be a really good story....it wouldn't have to be that long...6 or so chapters...what a great start though...but like i said....to bad its a one -shot...i loved it....keep up the good work......and get back to my other story...lol...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Well, I've been toying with the idea of a Lucius/Ginny fic for over a year.  I'm sort of getting my feet wet here.  I know at some point I will want to write one.  Whether I use this as a base I don't know, but I do want to write something with him.  Thanks for taking the time to read it.

10/10

like_queen

A nice one-shot!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you for taking the time to read it.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Great quickie!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thanks.  I decided I needed to give Lucius a bit of attention.  I've been toying with writing a story with him as the main focus for a little over a year.  I'm getting my toes wet here.

10/10

deviantauthor

Nice read.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thanks!

10/10

Lutrica

Oh I love this!!! I wish it were a little more than a one shot though, I would love to see which redhead he falls for.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

I'm toying with the idea of doing a Lucius fic.  I usually pair him with an adult Ginny in my stories, so that's who I eluded to here.Thanks so much for reading this.  I appreciate your taking the time to do so.

10/10

severina

this is FANTASTIC! great one-shot, especially the ending.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you!  This is actually the first story I've done in which Lucius is the main focus.I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reading it too.

0/10

snarkysiren

coolio!! is there a sequel?

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

There isn't a sequel, but I took this idea and made it into "A Tale of Two men." 

10/10

phoenix

Poor Lucius. It's heartbreaking how Narcissa gave up everything to give him a second chance. It's nice to see that he finally realized the wrong of his past ways. Nice snapshot

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you for taking the time to read this and leaving me a review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

Thank you for taking the time to read this and leaving me a review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

9/10

Dreamy_Dragon

I really enjoyed this. I just love good Lucius fics. Interesting perspective on him and I wonder who the redhead might be ;-) any chance her name might begin with a G?

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Choosing A Different Path)

I love a good Lucius fic too.  This one-shot turned into an idea for a longer story, which I called A Tale of Two Men.

And yes, that name would start with a G.

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