BOOK II
Chapter 2 of 2
themistresssnapeIt started as a sonnet, this is what came of it. A bit of a romantic epic in blank verse, though some lines didn't quite hit iambic pentameter. (teehee, please forgive me?!)
ReviewedBOOK II
“Stay, let us talk,” came words sweet like honey
From my beloved’s lips. “Mine intent with
Thee is wholly true, love. These eyes fixed fast
Upon thy form are fully thyn, these lips
Are thyn for whatever thou wilt have them
Do. To speak of that love I hold for thee,
To smile and laugh at the sound of thy sweet
Tender voice, to kiss those savory fruits
That serve as thy lips. All this and more, love
If thou may endure it. These two arms will
Embrace thee night and day, to hold thee safe
Against mine chest from dusk’s fade to dawn’s light,
For me to be the first and last thee shall
See. What love could I give that wouldst give thee
Satisfaction of mine intent? What truth
Wouldst thou take with thee this night? An holy
Vow made upon some starry phantom, some high
Celestial orb that is no constant but
In change? Would such a vow please thee, and keep
Thee in my love? Or some passion filled and
Lofty declaration of love? Should I
Climb some nearby hill and from such lofty
Heights proclaim my love with full resounding
Voice? Tell me, love, what I must do to keep
Thee happy here.”
So warm’d was I by his hearty words that
No sound could I make, but sin in lovely
Awe and peace. Then much his words went thru my
Soul, and heard them I with new thoughts devised.
“Wholly true be thyn intent? Thou speakest
Not of that, my dear. No, but of which many
Affections thou wouldst show’r upon me both
Day and endless night. Don’t tempt me with words
Carnal and damnable for thou art wrong to
Speak to me thus. What true intent thou hast,
Thou hast not spoken of it yet.”
Downcast my beloved set his blue-green
Eyes and withdrew himself from me. To some
Great high window he stole, and look’d out over
The earth beneath his feet. “Thou wouldst have me
To be an honorable man, but thou seekest
Too much. I give thee freely all of who I
Am, but I fear it shall fall too short for
Thyn holy quest. Wait, for in fair light of
Day many shall be there to bear thee witness
To mine most unholy, profaned, ill bred
Character, and all who see thee brim with
Adoration of such unworthy beast
Shall rend thee hence from whatever grasp I hold.
For non of this world shall look upon me
And see what with eyes of love thou doest so
Cherishingly behold. I would not for
All the world, these moonlit trees, the ever mov’d
Sparkle of yon water, to see thee brought low
Before all who held thee once dear. If thou
Find my plea likewise unworthy, I free
Thee from whatever blessed bond brought thee here,
And beg thee, speak of this to none and leave
Me to my ever-reaching grief. I have
Lost thee, which is death enough without the
Public pleasantries.”
“So quickly forgotten that love which was
Held so dear. Hast thou lost me to the grave
So soon? I do not feel as if I am
Dead and in the tomb. No, but cold as death
For thou hast cast me off thus with haste. Should
I turn from thee so dearly held with so
Much speed? Even if I wilt it so, I could
Not offend thee such, so violent and
Stained. If thou doest love me, with pure and
Holy, true and honest love, then whatever
Pains may be inflicted shall be endured.
But what is this thou seek to profess, that
Thou art some profaned, unholy beast so
Unworthy of mine discerning eye? Thou
Do wrong thyself in such misgiving speech.
I love thee, that is enough. I look on
Thee and like, that is enough. Thou needst only
Make thy request of me, and all the world
Shall I lay at thy feet. Settle with thyn
Holy self, how much thou love and why. The
Truth be told ere either us go.”
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i liek your other work too! i mean to say that good flow
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Of Jensen and Isolde)
Thanks. It's kind of a trip to know that. ~The Mistress
this is v ery pretty
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Of Jensen and Isolde)
Thanks. I'm working on more of it. I have no clue how long it's going to be. ~The Mistress