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Commitment
apisa_b7 Reviews | 5.71/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
All she wanted was to avoid accidentally slipping into a relationship. She wanted him to make a decision, so he never would feel lured into a trap.
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apisa_b
Member Since 2005 | 9 Stories | Favorited by 7 | 539 Reviews Written | 94 Review Responses
I'm a 40-something old, happily married mother of a teenager, whose passion is reading, reading and - oh did I already mention - reading.
I live in Austria, so my native language is German (or better: a slang thereof), but since I was forced to learn English in school I reluctantly discovered my love for it.
Here at the Petulant Poetess I can combine my passions: reading, English and the Potterverse.
So far I'm mostly reading; I'm feeling comfortable enough to write the occasional one-shot, but I don't think I have skill to pen down a longer story. But who knows ...
Reviews for Commitment
I love that they all get their happy ending, even if the Weasley men need a little guidance where relationships are concerned.
I wonder how many hearts have been broken,by things left unsaid. Thank you for a lovely,insightful story.
I wonder how many hearts have been broken,by things left unsaid. Thank you for a lovely,insightful story.
What an interesting idea to draw a parallel between Charlie and Ron and their relationship problems. I like the way you wrote the three main characters; they all are very believable.
Response from apisa_b (Author of Commitment)
Thanks!
nice story
well written and thought out
Response from apisa_b (Author of Commitment)
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it.
I really enjoyed this story. I think the Charlie angle on the Hermione / Ron relationship works. I like that it paralleled his own "relationship" and helped him. Ron was spot on in here. Good job.
Response from apisa_b (Author of Commitment)
Hi Sun, thank you for reading and reviewing, despite Snape not even being mentioned in this story Your encouragement means a lot to me. Thank you.
Very sweet story, and I absolutely love how Charlie comes so close to wolloping Ron in order to get through his this head.
Response from apisa_b (Author of Commitment)
Well, Ron's skull can be a bit thick sometimes :-)Thank you.