Detention at Spinner's End
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This piece was written for TPMM's Smut on Spinner's End challenge. The story takes place after HBP and Severus Snape is hiding out at Spinner's End with Peter Pettigrew. Life with the Animagus leaves much to be desired and Snape finds he needs a diversion. Contains smut, elf wine, polyjuice and more smut.
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I'm a 40 something Snapeaholic. My Muggle friends think I'm nutters so I must align myself with those that appreciate his sexy, swishy robes, snarky attitude and velvet voice. *fans self* I have a definite liking for lemondrops and wool socks (really!) and am a bit mischievious at times.
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I love the sexiness and naughtiness of it all. But I thought I'd comment on the line: "A man who would sacrifice himself so that foolish boys would have a chance to grow up." It sums up, so succinctly, why so many of us sympathize with the dour Potions Master. Well done. Smut and poetry together!
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story. Thanks for reviewing! I love that line too. In that scene, I wanted to portray the fustration that Snape must feel with working undercover for the good of the wizarding world and not being able to reveal his true identity or agenda. The only one who knew is now dead and Snape is feeling stranded with no allies, hoping that someone has the sense to figure it out so he is not damned for eternity. Of course, the role playing and sex helps to bring that fustration down a notch. 
Intriguing and atmospheric chapter. I wonder what's in that potion? ~snerk~ Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
Why, thank you! What's in the potion, you ask? Well it sure isn't Millicent Bulstrode's cat's hair. LOL! Next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for taking a peek at my story.
i thought wormtail was going to find the little girl for a moment and i cant wait to read what snape does
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
Oh, don't worry. I won't let that vermin hurt her. LOL! As for Snape, well... lets just say he will get the fun he deserves. 
Great start! I can't wait to see what's next. Teehee...
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
Chapter 2 is in the queue. Hey, that rhymes! Anyway, I think you will like what the professor has in store for the lovely ladies of the night. He has planned a very entertaining evening. 
This one was good. Mmmmm hmmm... Hehehe...
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
Oh! LOL! This was the product of me asking my husband the question... "What do men fantasize about?" One thing led to another and then I got to thinking... "What would happen if two Snape fan girls got the Potions Master in bed?" Hence, the jealous fight over his "magic wand". Anyway, it was a fun chapter to write.
Excellent ending. At first I had worried wormtail would harm the little girl, but the ending was great.
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
I'm glad you liked it. I know others were a bit concerned with what might happen to young Lucy. But never fear, Severus came and save the day. I really enjoyed having Snape torment that repugnant rodent. "You see, Wormtail, there are things worst than death. Like owing a life's debt to one Severus Snape!" Mwa! Ha! Ha! Ha!
What a naughty, boy. I did like the Granger bit. Teehee
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
Yes, he is naughty, and that's why we love him so.
I'm glad you liked the Hermione bit. A bit dark, but delicious none-the-less.
Good sustained imagination and tension throughout the chapters.You played to this site’s major fantasy of succumbing to Snape.
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
Why, thank you! I'm glad that I kept your interest. I have just submitted the 4th and final chapter in this little "fantasy fic". I hope you will enjoy that one as well.
Oh, I hope to read more of this soon. this is wonderful!
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
Thanks for the review! I'm so happy you enjoyed my naughty little fic. I really have thought about adding on (plus several people have insisted). I have several ways the story could continue but before I venture on, real life has to give me a break. LOL! I so appreciate you taking the time to give me your input. Reviews really do help inspire the writer. 
What a lovely way to wake up. When he's finished with those two, please send him my way. That was so hot, I can't wait for another chapter - brilliant.
Response from potionmistress60 (Author of Detention at Spinner's End)
*snicker* Maybe we'll have to give him some time to recoop before we send him to you. Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
