7/5/07
Chapter 2 of 2
KaesespaetzleThis is the first version of "Five Men".
I must confess, that I forgot how a haiku works...*blushes*
ReviewedSeverus
Aloof in times of darkness
And self-destructive
But that’s the fascination
Draco
Ambition distinguishes him
Though self-importance
And arrogance countervail
Blaise
Attracting girls at first blush
Always self-absorbed
-Unsolvable mystery
Ron
Annoying most of the time
Self-mocking at times
Cheering me up anytime
Viktor
Approachable and caring
Never self-praising
In spite of his famousness
~*~
A/N: PLEASE, review, I want to know your thoughts about the poems and the different versions...
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5 Reviews | 4.4/10 Average
While this has the reverse syllabage of a haiku, I really like the readability of it. Now I need to go back and reread the haiku version to see the differences. I enjoyed them..
Response from Kaesespaetzle (Author of Five Men)
thank you for reading and enjoying;-)
I love people who review, you know?!
They seem very much the same. Sorry, could you explain what A Haikus is? Anyway, interesting all the same.
Response from Kaesespaetzle (Author of Five Men)
yeah, they are^^
A haiku is a japanese form of poetry, normally it's just one stanza and about nature, but most important: it's composed of three lines that have 5-7-5 syllabels...
thank you for r+reviewing!
Both sets were great. I think they were all spot on. :) More?
Response from Kaesespaetzle (Author of Five Men)
thank you!
ehm, ask my muse^^
do you mean in this style or in general?
~Karo
Interesting. A bit short, but it basically sums up all of the five guys. I honestly don't get Hermione/Snape though. The rest, yeah, understandable. 
Response from Kaesespaetzle (Author of Five Men)
thx for reviewing; after notsosaintly took some time to help me, I'm now actually able to answer them
Do you like HG/SS?
I think the main fascination about Severus is, that he's so mysterious, dark, and...intense? don't know how to call it...
It's just kind of a mix between desrcribing him and her being attracted to his aloofness/mysteriousness(?).
*shrugs* I hope, I helped you at least a bit...
thank goodness there is no Neville in her crush list! whew!