Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of 9
kellychamblissNeville, Madam Pomfrey, and Professors Sprout and Flitwick come up with a plan for helping Professor McGonagall.
ReviewedChapter 2
It was nearly two o'clock in the morning, and they were still debating in hushed whispers in Madam Pomfrey's office Madam Pomfrey, Professor Sprout, and Professor Flitwick. No one had told Neville to leave, so he stayed, sitting silent and out of sight. He thought that if they noticed him, they'd probably try to send him to bed or something, but he'd made up his mind that he wasn't going anywhere until he knew what was going to happen to Professor McGonagall.
It had become clear that she remembered nothing not her name, not her occupation, not Hogwarts, not the war, none of her colleagues. Her magic appeared to be intact, but it was instinct only; when they'd asked to her to recite a spell or perform a specific transfiguration, she couldn't.
The professors and Madam Pomfrey had tried charms and spells and potions; nothing had worked. Finally they had given Professor McGonagall a Dreamless Sleep potion, and then the talk had turned to damage control.
"Yes, I can keep her sedated here," Madam Pomfrey was saying, "and we can think up some story to put off the Headmaster for a day or two. But sooner or later, he's going to demand to see her, and we can't risk that."
"No," Professor Flitwick agreed. "I fear Snape would use this as an excuse to send Minerva off to the Janus Thickey ward."
"As if he'd need an excuse," sniffed Madam Pomfrey. "But you're right, Filius. And we'd be lucky ever to see her again."
Images of his parents' grey lives on the Janus Thickey Ward flashed through Neville's mind, and he clenched his teeth. No. McGonagall would go to the Thickey Ward over his dead body. He'd hide her in his dorm room if he had to; hell, she could use Harry's empty bed.
"Well, maybe she'll be herself again in a day or two," Professor Sprout said, with more hope than conviction.
"Maybe," said Madam Pomfrey, who clearly didn't believe it. "I'll have to do some further research."
"But. . ." said Professor Sprout, "it's only a matter of time, surely? She will be herself again, Poppy. Won't she?"
Neville had to strain to hear those last words, so softly did Professor Sprout say them. She seemed no more eager than Neville to voice what he was sure they all feared: that the Professor McGonagall they had known was gone for good. It was possible, Neville knew few understood the permanence of Cruciatus damage better than he did.
There was a silence before Madam Pomfrey answered. "She might," she said finally. "But usually, there's no telling with amnesia cases. Her memory could return all at once, or gradually. Or not at all. Only time will tell."
"We'll have to hide her," said Professor Sprout. "Until her memory comes back or we can find a cure. Horace and I can put our heads together about potions and ingredients, and Filius, you "
"Hide her where?" interrupted Madam Pomfrey. "You know Snape has the castle covered over with tracker charms; he'd be alerted the second she left the grounds. And we can hardly keep shifting her from one of our quarters to another. It would be like one of those French bedroom farces."
"And I wouldn't be able to charm her to stay invisible indefinitely," said Professor Flitwick.
"Where, then?" cried Professor Sprout, throwing out her hands in frustration.
"I know where," Neville heard himself say. "The Room of Requirement."
* * *
It took Neville nearly half an hour to get the professors to agree even to look for the Room. His unexpected announcement had been met with a babble of argument, surprise, and objection.
"Neville, dear," Professor Sprout had said gently, "I'm afraid the Room of Requirement is just a myth. You know, wishful thinking."
"No, it isn't," Neville had insisted. "I've been in it. A lot." He'd explained about Dumbledore's Army and Dobby, and finally Professors Flitwick and Sprout had accompanied him to the seventh floor. Once they'd been standing in front of the blank wall opposite the tapestry of Barnabas the Barmy, though, Neville's nerve had almost failed him.
"Please," he'd said to the wall, feeling foolish. "Please, we need a place for Professor McGonagall to stay for a while. She's in real danger. The Room is our only hope. Please."
The Room must have heard his desperation, for after a few seconds of (to Neville) painful suspense, the door had appeared. Behind it was what looked to be the interior of a small house a sitting room, a bedroom, a tiny bathroom and loo, and a narrow kitchen with an old-fashioned dresser and a well-scrubbed deal table. There were even windows that looked out onto a flat, grey expanse of moor.
"It's her cottage!" said Professor Sprout in surprise. "In Caithness. The one she inherited from her gran. You've been there, Filius. Of course, she doesn't spend much time there now. . ."
She chattered on, wandering through the little rooms, touching a book here, a chair there, and stopping in confusion in front of a hand-operated water pump over the kitchen sink. She moved the handle up and down experimentally, and water gushed forth.
"That's odd," Professor Sprout said. "This is the way the kitchen looked in her Muggle gran's day, but Minerva had all the magical mod cons put in. . ."
Neville suddenly understood. "It's the Room," he said. "Somehow it knows she can't make use of her magic right now. So it's given her Muggle tools."
"Fascinating," said Professor Flitwick, taking out his wand and murmuring complicated diagnostic spells, his eyes shining with the same light that Hermione's always had when she was immersed in research.
"Oh, stop it, Filius," said Professor Sprout. "There will be plenty of time for that later. We need to get Minerva safely installed before everyone starts waking up, and it can't be far from dawn now."
She shooed Professor Flitwick and Neville towards the door, but paused to give one last look around the little cottage, a broad smile on her face.
"I'll fetch her clothes and books from her quarters. And we should leave her wand on the mantel, don't you think, for when her magic starts to come back? Yes, I do think Minerva will be happy here."
* * *
Back in the hospital wing, they made their final plans.
"Obviously it's best if as few people know about this as possible," Madam Pomfrey said. "We can't risk Snape and his Legilimency, so I think just myself and one other person. The rest of you can leave your memories here in my pensieve, and I'll give them back to you on an as-needed basis. Pomona, you're Minerva's best friend on the staff, so probably you should know "
"No," said Professor Flitwick. "No offense, Pomona, but I think it should be young Longbottom here. We need someone who can easily get into the Room of Requirement, and Mr. Longbottom appears to be our resident expert. He and the Room clearly have a strong connection." He paused to beam at Neville. "In addition, he's probably the last person Snape will suspect of involvement."
Neville's stomach plummeted. "But. . ." he stammered. "If he tries. . .I mean, I'm pants at Occlumency. . ."
"We'll remove your memories if necessary, Neville, just temporarily, you know," said Professor Sprout. "Meanwhile, when Professor McGonagall turns up missing, you just keep your head down and act as baffled as everyone else." She patted him on the back and then suddenly looked distressed. "Oh, no, Filius! We'll probably have to Oblivate that little girl. . .your Ravenclaw who came to fetch Neville."
Professor Flitwick looked grim. "Yes, I think it's justified," he said, and Madam Pomfrey nodded. Then Flitwick's face softened. "Poor little thing, at least she'll have one fewer bad memory. . ."
"I'll wake Minerva and explain things to her," said Madam Pomfrey with a brisk change of subject. "Filius, you can charm her and Longbottom to be invisible for as long as it takes them to settle in. Longbottom, if I know your professor, she'll ask you a million questions and won't take 'no' for an answer. But try not to tell her too much, will you? Let her remember on her own."
"I'll get Minerva's things from her quarters right now," Professor Sprout said, heading for the door. "And we can shrink them for you to carry with you, Neville."
"I wait!" said Neville. It was all moving far too quickly for him.
Everyone stopped and looked at him expectantly.
"I " He swallowed and started again. "I don't think I can do this. I mean, I want to help, of course I do, but I'm. . .well, I'm practically a Squib, and "
"Neville Longbottom!" It was Professor Sprout, and she was livid. Eyes blazing, she advanced towards him and shook her wand in his face. "I never want to hear you say such a thing again. You're a good wizard and an excellent boy no, I lie, you're a man now and it's time you understood how impressive you are!"
She gazed up at him fiercely (when had he got taller than she was?) and then suddenly flung her arms around him. "I'm sorry, my dear," she whispered. "I know it's frightening, and we're asking a lot of you. More than we should. But you can do this. Minerva will be in good hands with you, I have no doubt of it."
"I'll try," Neville said, and Professor Sprout gave him a watery smile before heading to the door again.
Madam Pomfrey cleared her throat. "Right. Well. Let's get Professor McGonagall ready, shall we?"
She went behind the screen, and Neville could hear the murmur of voices. Professor Flitwick, meanwhile, Summoned a chair and sank into it gratefully. He sent another zipping towards Neville as he said, "She's right, you know. Professor Sprout, that is. About you. You've got the goods, young Longbottom." He nodded sagely. "Oh, yes. You've got the goods."
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Wow. This was so good. My heart broke for Neville. I actually cried at the ending. He never got to say goodbye. I loved this so much! I never thought I'd like Neville/Minerva but I'm totally a fan now. Thanks for an amazing story!
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thank you for reading and commenting! I confess that I find this pairing hard to believe in, but as I was writing, they worked well together. Glad you liked it.
I'm not disappointed in the ending at all. It does leave me wondering, though, was this just a respite from the stress for Neville? Or will McGonagall get her memories back from the ROR days at some point. If so, does she ever tell Neville? The possibilities are endless!
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thank you so much! And thanks especially for commenting on every chapter. I know it takes extra work for readers, but it means so much to the authors.I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and didn't find the pairing just too hard to believe.
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
You're welcome! I feel like you all work so hard and provide me with hours of free entertainment, so the least I can do is share my thoughts on your work.
I hope this ends well. I mean, it is obviously mutual and consensual, but what would Profesdor Mcgonagall think?
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
You've hit on exactly why I couldn't write this pairing with both of them in their "right" minds. I really don't think the Professor would forgive herself.
What a wise move to think on it before acting, but somehow, I don't think he'll change his mind.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
No, I don't think so, either! We all find it so hard to talk ourselves out of something we really, really want to do.
It actually makes me feel better about seventh year to know that these two have a refuge from the madness of war. I hope that when Professor McGonagall's memories return, that she retains Minerva's as well.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
That year would just have been hellish. Even a temporary escape would have been better than nothing.
What a nice easygoing friendship they've developed. I can see how it would be hard to reconcile Minerva with what he knows of Profesdor McGonagall.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
I know that "amensia" is a sort of literary cheat, but honestly, I couldn't figure out another way to make this pairing work! The two characters ("Minerva" and "Professor McG") did start to become quite distinct in my mind.
It's funny from our perspective to know that Snape is desperate to find her for different reasons than the staff thinks. I'm glad Neville is planning to see her. If she is cooped up alone too long, she may pull a Sirius Black.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
The whole DH year is fascinating to me -- you know that someone had to figure out the truth about Snape. But they probably couldn't have done much with the knowledge. It's fun to play around with his double and triple role.
Poor Neville, having to hear those kinds of stories from his gran. Of course, maybe he'll get a glimpse of her firsthand. Looking forward to finding out.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Neville's gran is one of my favorite characters to write. I wish I could have worked her into this story.
Good old ROR. This is still plausible, even in canon. We all know Neville can rise to the occasion, he just needs to be shoved in that direction.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks! Keeping this story anchored in canon was one of my main goals, and I'm glad you think it works.
Well, I didn't see the very ending of this chapter coming. I love Neville's sentiment on feeling relieved to hand the reigns to an adult. I am light years older than he, and I still have occasions where I think, "okay, we need to find an adult," then I realize I am one. This chapter was very well done. I'm not going to run off and start shipping Neville/Minerva, but I can kind of see, especially at this time in canon, how they could fulfill a need for one another.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks for reading! I confess, I never even considered Minerva/Neville as a pairing, but once I was challenged to it, I had great fun with it. (I have the same thoughts about being an "adult.")
LOL, Neville, you're thinking like a man! :)
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Ha! Yes, he is, for better and worse. Thanks for reading.
What can I say? The whole time I was reading this chapter I had this big grin on my face. Well done! Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks, Beth! So glad you enjoyed it. I wanted Minerva and Neville to have a bit of a nice time during this otherwise horrible year.~~Kelly
Not every student gets to find out what their teachers are like outside of the classroom. :)
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
And it's often something of an eye-opener when they do /g/. Thanks for reading and commenting; I appreciate it.~~Kelly
I see now, Poppy had to take charge and remind him to go back. :)
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
I wanted to make sure to plug that pensieve plot hole!~~Kelly
How will he remember to go back and get the memories? Always wondered about that with Pensieves. :)
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Me, too! Like with Snape's Worse Memory -- if he had taken the memory out of his head, how did he know what Harry had seen? Thanks for commenting.~K
Nice that they all think well of Nev. :)
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks! I like to think that Neville's worth is recognized by some of his teachers.~~Kelly
Uh-oh, that doesn't sound promising :0
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Yeah, when the Carrows show up, problems start! Thanks for reading.~~Kelly
Such a sweet chapter... I'm glad they got to spend some time walking the moors, but it would have been lovelier if he could have joined her for dinner. Maybe tomorrow.It's clear that they are beginning to see each other in a different light, and I can't help but wonder where this will take them.Thanks for a great chapter.Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks for reading! I thought they both needed a bit of pleasant down-time.~Kelly
Neville's encounter with Snape would have left me shaky and nervous. I'm happy that Madam Pomfrey left him a message about coming to see her so he'd remember that he should visit Minerva. I can't begin to imagine what it would be like to have no memories of my life before and to have to spend two days all by myself wondering what the hell happened and what I should be doing.Great chapter!Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks! I always enjoy trying to imagine what that DH year was like for Severus -- the fine line he had to walk. Glad you enjoyed it.
Neville's gran is a hoot! "...as far as we knew, anyway."I hope Minerva will be able to keep her promise to stay in her sanctuary, but if Neville visits her after he has been 'disciplined' by one of the Carrows I'm almost certain that all hell will break loose.Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Augusta is always great fun to write. Thanks for the comment!~Kelly
Thank goodness Neville was there to tell them about the RoR. He is having to grow into his responsibilities now whether he's ready or not.Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
The R of R is a boon for every fanficcer when it comes to plot. /g/~Kelly
Now he knew how the younger children felt, Neville thought as he walked with Madam Pomfrey to the hospital wing, balancing McGonagall on a levitated stretcher between them. Someone else was in charge, an adult he could trust, and the wave of relief that washed over him was almost strong enough to knock him down. This really caught my attention. It perfectly describes the first time a child/teenager is old enough to grasp the idea that they have a responsibility to a younger child to see them safely home.Now just how many kinds of curses did the Carrows use on Minerva?Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
We know from canon that Neville did a huge amount of growing-up during the DH year, but we don't see it happen. I've enjoyed exploring that dimension. Thanks for reading!~Kelly
Great fic, I loved it. This last chapter made me cry a little, when she didn't remember. I loved Minerva and Neville, I'd never read a story about them. It was really good.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks very much! I'd never considered writing this pairing, but when I was challenged to do it, I couldn't resist trying.
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Thanks very much! I'd never considered writing this pairing, but when I was challenged to do it, I couldn't resist trying.
No disappointment here. It's a wonderful story, filled with empathy, sympathy, and caring on all levels. I even wondered if Minerva might have confided just a bit in Madam Pomfrey, and if the good mediwitch might have suggested that Professor Flitwick remove her memories of her time Neville– for safe keeping only, of course.Thanks for sharing this very interesting tale! (Hope you write a sequel. *hint-hint*)Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Beth, I really appreciate your regular and thoughtful reviews; they're such a treat to receive, especially for a story that I wasn't sure would find any readers at all. Thank you for your kind words! (I haven't ruled out a sequel, not entirely. . .)~~Kelly
This is such a sweet chapter, kelly. Without going into the mechanics of their love-making, you've let us know that it was truly something they both wanted and that they didn't feel any embarrassment over it.And I couldn't help wondering what Augusta would have said about her grandson's "mulishness."*is grinning*Beth
Response from kellychambliss (Author of Roses in December)
Oh, I'm so glad this chapter worked for you! I really felt it would be a mistake to be too graphic with the love scene, but I did want to show the tenderness of Neville's first time and the basic equality with which he and Minerva meet.~~Kelly