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purpleygirl

5 Reviews | 8.0/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Romance Slash Forbidden Forest 847 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Remus Lupin Severus Snape

It's Remus's birthday, but while Severus finds something for Remus, it's Remus who has something important to give Severus.

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Chapter 1: All Yours

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Member Since 2006 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 1 | 5 Reviews Written | 46 Review Responses

Likes: To throw obstacles at Snape and watch with morbid fascination.
Dislikes: A sad lack of said obstacles.

I always welcome constructive criticism, if you feel like offering it. :-)

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0/10

Lovely! I really like the lite tone of your story while you managed to portray the dynamics of their relationship so thoroughly, thank you!PS: Chocolates are always welcome ...

Response from purpleygirl (Author of All Yours)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. Light tones seem to be difficult for me ... You noticed I couldn't help straying into deeper, more thoughtful waters. Ah well.Thankfully, the chocolates kept it grounded! ;-)

10/10

Loved this!! Lol, those chocolates! I wouldn't mind having one ;) lol

Response from purpleygirl (Author of All Yours)

Thanks! You take the chocolates, I'll take the boys. ;-)

10/10

LOL, a threesome with chocolates. What a fine idea! :)

Response from purpleygirl (Author of All Yours)

Fine, but quite messy. ;-)

Response from purpleygirl (Author of All Yours)

Oops, forgot to thank you for commenting!Thank you. :-)

10/10

A threesome with Severus and chocolate, lucky Remus.

Response from purpleygirl (Author of All Yours)

Doesn't he get all the luck in fanfic? Thanks for commenting. :-)

10/10

I love the immediacy and flowing dynamics between them, the intimate actions between them, and the observations and nuances of Remus' about and between him and Severus. And then, wham bam, Severus stills... Remus said the word. I held my breath, and was relieved to move on as they moved on--lovely, lovely work!

Response from purpleygirl (Author of All Yours)

Thank you so much for your lovely, thoughtful review! I'm nosey to know readers' thoughts - your comments are what every writer loves to hear. Really chuffed you enjoyed!

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