The poetical prose, in particular the editor's and Theo contributions, is just so lovely and flowing--so that the crisp humour is all the more wonderfully contrasted and accentuated--love the plot thickening and the girls determined to get more involved and try to take matters into their own hands, as much as possible. Your writing evokes so many different emotional levels and reactions within its wonderful compact yet richly descriptive style(s)--can't wait for and looking forward to more! *nudge, nudge*