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Time Passed By
imhilien6 Reviews | 8.0/10 (6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
When Snape gets amnesia, will he remember his wife, Hermione?
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Work in admin by day to support chocolate habit, writes in spare time.
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I'm glad his memories returned. :)
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for that. :)
Thank you. I've read so many stories about Hermione's amnesia, that I enjoyed reading one about Severus's. If you're ever inspired, I would wish for a version that's a bit longer. Why did he remember? Surely he's had other nights of good sleep. And thanks for showing us their feelings by describing non-verbals instead of simply telling us.
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for reviewing. ^_^ I might do a longer version one day, it sounds tempting!He remembered because he was sleeping in the main room instead of his usual bed and the 'wrongess' triggered his memories.
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for reviewing. ^_^ I might do a longer version one day, it sounds tempting!He remembered because he was sleeping in the main room instead of his usual bed and the 'wrongess' triggered his memories.
A wonderful job of portraying Hermione's pain, in so few words. Severus was confused, but Hermione could remember everything that had been between them, no wonder she had been crying.
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for your kind review. ^_^
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for your kind review. ^_^
Very well written, but the solution came so quickly and effortlessly that the whole thing seemed to me rather pointless. "Someone stole my credit card and Social Security number; this could be a major financial disaster; wait, there they are lying under the table; minor inconvenience averted." I mean this as constructive criticism, not a put-down. This should be a bigger story-- and it could be a good one. Otherwise it doesn't seem worth bothering about.
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for reviewing.
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for reviewing.
Poor Severus and Hermione, finally done in by a corker of a potions mishap...though only temporarily, thankfully.Hermione's anguish and Severus' polite confusion echo very clearly, and it's the levity of his remembering their honeymoon that no doubt amuses and removes her pain. Much better to have tears of laughter. :)
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for your kind review. ^_^ Yes, it was a bit scary for Hermione there for a while...
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thanks for your kind review. ^_^ Yes, it was a bit scary for Hermione there for a while...
This was just... just... perfect. Just the right amount of angst balanced by a happy ending.
I am normally horrid at leaving reviews, but this especially touched me tonight. Thank you for sharing this.
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thank you for your lovely review. ^_^
Response from imhilien (Author of Time Passed By)
Thank you for your lovely review. ^_^