Wow! Talk about a lot of unanswered questions. I don't know who to feel most sorry for.

Ooh, very dark! In a light-hearted, suburban kind of way.

Urgh, but this is creepy. You've led me into a room with a dozen doors I could try to get out of, and I'm left all alone to choose... or try them all. I'm even free to decide which character I want to pity or admire! A wonderful narration, too. No, please don't write a prequel ot sequel any time soon. Grant us time to speculate! Eventually maybe... but not right away.Or come to think, this story could be a prompt for a challenge?

This one is scary. It may just give me nightmares (which is, in essence, a compliment). That what gives it such power is what is left unsaid. What has happened, since Hermione wants to Obliviate him? Is she protecting him? Herself? The more I try to answer the questions, the more do those nightmares loom in the distance.I'd never be able to write such a story myself. I mean, my review seems to be wordier than the actual story. I tip my hat to you.Do I like the story? I don't know. I don't think I'm supposed to. But it'll stay with me. Well done. *shudder*

This is one of the creepiest things I have ever read; The hair on the back of my neck actually stood up.Bravo, you!!!

Dark, very dark.  But good. :)

*Shudder* Very creepy, there are so many storys here, in so few words. I have read it three times now, and each time another story takes shape in my mind.

Interesting that Hermione would choose to trap someone in a relationship by use of Obliviate.  Or was it really her choice?

Ouch, that's brutal.  I hope these remain thoughts in his head, and that in time they will go away.  Interesting version of how things could be post war.

Ooooh, this is deliciously dark!