TWO
Chapter 2 of 7
sandlapperSeverus is cursed during the Final Battle, only his Heart's True Love can save him.
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With a rough groan, Professor Snape opened his eyes. He jerked his arm and hand up to shield his eyes from the sun that was beaming down. He stared blinkingly up at the sky for a moment, watching clouds scuttle by and trying to clear his head. After a few moments he sneered, remembering the events of the last day from the battle to the unknown curse the Dark Lord had thrown at him, all the way to how he ended up lying on his back in the grass.
Severus hated travel by Portkey. Not only was it a harsh mode of transport, flinging a body through space the way that it did, but it was also quite undignified, especially when one wasn't expecting it. And if there was one thing that Severus Snape hated more than Portkeying, it was being undignified. He rose up from the prone position he found himself in, wincing as his protesting muscles screamed in disagreement to the movement, and took stock of his immediate surroundings, finding himself in quite a lovely garden. The peace and quiet of the place made Severus ill at ease after the chaos of the battlefield he had just been a part of, and he quickly scanned the area for anyone or anything that could be an enemy. Finding nothing, he turned his attention to the slight moan that broke through his musings.
"Of course, I can't forget my saviour," he thought and rolled his eyes.
He looked over his shoulder to the slight figure that was huddled next to a particularly fine specimen of foxglove. Any closer and she would have been a part of the plantings. Sighing deeply, Severus gained his feet and made his way gingerly to his "kidnapper". The little brat never could leave well enough alone. Always having to be "right", Granger tended towards being over-bearing, and that aggravated Snape almost as much as Portkeying and being undignified. Sighing heavily again, and ruthlessly shoving down the thought of just leaving her where she was and heading back to Hogwarts to take his chances, Severus waved his wand and muttered, "Ennervate."
Nothing could have prepared him for what happened next. But, then, nothing in his life should ever come as a surprise.
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Hermione despised magical travel and Portkeying ranked close to the top of the list, not too far behind brooms. But needs must, and for some reason that she couldn't begin to understand and dared not examine too closely, Hermione felt the desperate need to get Professor Snape away from Voldemort and to safety, and a Portkey was what she had to work with. The phoenix hairclip deposited the two on the grass of her parents' back garden, and the last thing that Hermione saw after they landed was a flare of blue light, and then everything went black.
Hermione was jerked abruptly to consciousness and she groaned as sunlight pressed in on her eyes making them water copiously. She squinted up at the black figure that towered over her and frantically scrabbled for her wand. The events of the past few days crashed over her in a wave of adrenaline drenched panic, and she surged to her feet, wand securely in hand.
"Who are you, what do you want?" she begged, her tone of voice belying the readiness of her defensive stance. "Did you Portkey with me? I don't remember anything."
Severus rolled his eyes and snapped, "Miss Granger, I should be asking you what YOU want. I was the one who was accosted on the battlefield and bodily dragged, against my will, to what I presume is your parents' home, and you have the audacity to berate me?"
Wiping her eyes fiercely, Hermione looked at the man staring down at her. His black eyes were flashing with some unnamable emotion and he was bleeding from several cuts on his face and hands. He looked as exhausted as she felt. Hermione stared, trying to place the dark man, he was so familiar to her, but other than a teasing in the back of her mind, she didn't know who this person was. The teasing turned into a slight ache, but try as she might, Hermione couldn't name the man standing before her.
"Miss Granger!"
The sudden exclamation of her name startled her into movement. Still focusing her wand on Severus, Hermione scrambled back from the man, almost falling in the process.
"How do you know me? I don't know who you are!" Hermione exclaimed with trepidation.
Snape huffed with irritation, and crossed his arms over his chest. "Miss Granger, have you lost your senses? Did you strike your head when we Portkeyed into your parents' garden? I assure you that I am still your Professor no matter what you and your little friends desire, and I don't appreciate being mocked. Especially when I didn't ask to be dragged off from Hogwarts."
Hermione stared in confusion. "Professor? I swear I don't know you. What did you teach? Were you there before I attended?" She reached a hand to her head and swayed slightly. "I really don't remember you... Maybe I did hit my head."
"May I check you for a head injury, Miss Granger? I would like to get this resolved and get some answers as to why you would take me from battle at Hogwarts. I am sure we are being looked for; unfortunately, we don't know which side is doing the looking." Severus waved his wand as he lectured and cast a spell at the witch.
"You were at the battle?" Hermione's eyes got big, and she brandished her wand at Snape. "Stop, what was that spell? Are you a Death Eater? Did you bring me here to keep me from helping Harry?"
Before he could read the diagnosis spell, Hermione cast in self-defence and was immediately disarmed by the Professor.
"MISS GRANGER! I am attempting to discover the reason for your memory loss. I would appreciate it if you refrain from attacking my person again. I assure you, one battle today was quite enough!"
A growing sense of deja vu was overtaking Hermione as the wizard continued his wand work and his berating of her person. "You must be one of Volde... "
"DO NOT SAY THAT NAME! And most certainly do not finish that thought."
The Potions master stopped his analysis and looked at Hermione in growing exasperation. "Granger, you know good and well I have been on the side of the Light spying for the Order, and if your prodigious brain had not wrapped around that tidbit from the clues undoubtedly dropped by the late Headmaster, surely you heard my declaration to the Dark Lord as I turned on him mere hours ago." Snape huffed again. "You don't have a brain injury of any type, so I would appreciate an end to this little game you are playing. Or should I assume that I am being detained here until your friends or the Order comes to take me away?"
Hermione looked in confusion at Severus. Her trembling hand still held out in front of her, but she was beginning to get lightheaded again. "I will send a Patronus to Professor McGonagall, she will sort this out. I won't cast any spells at you, I promise."
Severus rolled his eyes, but handed the witch her wand back while surreptitiously holding his on her just in case. "You go ahead and let them know where you are, but I will be leaving now. No sense in causing undue trouble."
"Wait, sir, you need to stay here. There has to be a reason that we Portkeyed here and we need to find out what it is. Perhaps you have some information... Unless you truly are a Death Eater... " Hermione's voice became shrill as panic rose in her.
As she started to flick her wand caught between messaging her friends and casting a spell at the man staring at her in consternation, Hermione's eyes rolled up in her head and she slowly began to fall. Snape caught her before she hit the ground and actually did strike her head, and she turned softly into his chest. He had to lean closer to hear her last mutterings before she was completely unconscious again.
"I do know who you are, you smell like home..."
Severus just shook his head at the ridiculous statement and lifted Hermione gently into his arms. He made his way into her parents' home, which was blessedly empty. Wandering through the kitchen and into the family room, he found the closest sofa to lay her on. He cast another diagnosis spell just to be sure there was no damage to her brain, and after ensuring she wasn't in danger from predators of the two-legged sort, Severus Snape Disapparated with a "pop", leaving everything behind.
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49 Reviews | 5.43/10 Average
This was a nifty little story! I would love to see some more of what happened when Severus got to the coastal cottage. But the most important part happened- they lived happily ever after. I read some of your replies to other reviewers, and I know all about strict timetables, m'dear. Someone once said that the perfect is the enemy of the good. You got 'er done, and it is very good!!!Hugs to Shell,Beth
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks, Beth~ you know I am harder on myself than any reviewer, but one does what one must do! Thanks so much for your words and friendship!! Hugs to you!
Oh, my achin' head. When will Severus learn to not strike out at people who are trying to help him? Has he forgotten what Hermione did to Portkey them to her parent's backyard?I hope Hermione will go back and put her memories n the Pensieve and pester Severus until he agrees to view them, too.I swear, he is the most exasperating man in the world... and that's probably one reason we love him so much. :^)Beth
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
We DO love his snarky, bad-boyness! Hope you are ready for the rest of the ride!
Yes! Soul mates. And I recall that one of the reasons Severus had come back to Hogwarts was that he needed the Headmaster's Pensieve!Now I hope Hermione can figure out how to convince Severus to trust her and work with her to undo what Voldemort had done! This is such an interesting story, shell! Thank you for sharing it with us.Beth
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Severus - Trust... we shall see, my friend, we shall see!
I totally love this connection Hermione and Severus have to each other. I wonder how they are going to work out what is happening to them, and how to reactivate her memory so that she know who he is? I think I'd like to have a bit of sit'n read with that pamphlet Dreames Between the Soules. Beth
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
That DOES sound like a fascinating tome, eh? Thanks for reading!!
I enjoyed the story up to the last chapter. The jump from disaster to an epilogue-like happy ending was very jaring. I can't say I was really satisfied with the wrap-up. In any case, thanks for sharing.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Glad you read it! And thanks for reviewing. I was on a strict timetable, and unfortunately, trying to flesh it out made it either extremely unwieldy and unreadable or just complete bushwah. I chose to go with the more simplistic ending...
The internet ate my comments the first time, so I'm going to just say "I love this story!"Beth
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thank you, Beth!
I like it, but the last jump in time left me feeling like the chapter was uploaded wrong or something. It was such a jump, maybe it's just me but it didn't feel right, as if it still needs more to segue the two parts together. Anyways, I still liked it overall, the concept of the curse is one I haven't seen before. :)
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I never could get the last part to really flesh out seamlessly... it wouldn't resolve itself no matter how I approached it. I chose to move from Severus' epiphany to a small wrap up.
"...the last thing that Hermione saw after they landed was a flare of blue light, and then everything went black."OMG! Did the blue curse Voldemort cast at Snape have anything to do with the flare of blue light that Hermione saw when they landed in her parents' backyard? Did it have anything to do with her losing her memory and with what the Dark Lord said to Severus just before he cast his curse? "Rest assured, Severus, remembering is ALL you will have for eternity!"And just where the hell did Severus get to? Please tell me he isn't just planning on leaving her there by herself? Well, now I have somewhere to go, too. The next chapter!Beth
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
So glad you are reading!! Hope you enjoy the rollercoaster!
Great first chapter!!! I love the phoenix hair clip cum Portkey, and I've got to see how many of my questions will be answered in the next chapter... and the ones after that.Beth
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
I like the idea of useful jewelry, myself! Maybe you will have ,ore questions with your answers!! Thanks for reading, Beth!
Great story I am sorry to see it end looking forward to a new story soon.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thank you so much! Hopefully, I will have something new ready soon, I have several things in the works. Glad you enjoyed my story.
It's a pity we didn't get to see the kiss that broke the spell on Severus, but all's well that ends well. Thank you for a lovely story.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks for reading! I may have to revisit the story and share that kiss with everyone in the future!!
Oh Severus, you will live to regret for those unkind words, hell may have no fury like a woman scorned, but Hermione does.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Severus really doesn't know when NOT to cross a line... but I think he has met his match in Hermione!
Okay, those were horribly mean things to say to her. But I have to admit I laughed a little at 'no more my soul mate than Hagrid'. Now I'm afraid I have the beginnings of a ridiculous humor fic running through my head where Hagrid is doused with love potion and tries to woo an unsuspecting...somebody. Anyway, sorry for the strange aside; I am finding the story quite enjoyable.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Severus does tend to lash out, doesn't he? And I SOOO hope you will write that fic, I could see him fawning over Trelawney or McGonagall!! Thanks for the review, we are getting on to the end, so hang on tight!
Hmmm, the plot thickens...Looking forward to more.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
It is going to get REAL interesting for sure! Thanks for reading.
What a shock for Hermione, and what is Albus up to. Looking forward to the next update.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thank you! More is on the way!
I'm so happy Hermione was able to find that Pensieve. Now she knows who Severus is, and that they're soul mates. I look forward to seeing what she does with that new found knowledge. Will she confront Severus, and let him know she remembers him, or will she be in denial.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Two stubborn people being led by a master manipulator! It is one bumpy ride! Thanks for reading!
Oh Harry. Why? Then again I'm not surprised. I wish we could have see Hermione's conversation with the Weasleys.. Interested in how this story will go. The phoenix clip is intriguing and how did Hermione get her memory of Severus back or did she?
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Harry does speak before he thinks! I am glad you are intrigued, more is on the way!
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Harry does speak before he thinks! I am glad you are intrigued, more is on the way!
She should have slapped them silly. I'm glad she found out before she wasted any more of her time. So now let the games begin. Its going to be a bumpy road for awhile I think. Looking forword to the ups and downs.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Oh, you know that our faves can't have an easy time of it!! I have often thought that Harry and Ron could use a good smack! Thanks for reading!
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Oh, you know that our faves can't have an easy time of it!! I have often thought that Harry and Ron could use a good smack! Thanks for reading!
I just found this story this morning and I really really like it!!! Looking forward to the next update :)
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks! There is more in the queue! Hope you continue to enjoy~
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks! There is more in the queue! Hope you continue to enjoy~
What happened? we were in the Granger's garden, and then a year has passed and Hermione and Harry are having a row! Did I skip a chapter? Very interesting, and a good chapter, but confusing, what happened with Hermione's memory loss?
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
No, you didn't miss anything! More answers and questions are on the way!!
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
No, you didn't miss anything! More answers and questions are on the way!!
“He rose up from the prone position he found himself in…” If Severus was prone, he would have awakened to a view of the ground underfoot, not the clouds overhead. The word you want is “supine.”
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks...
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks...
Interesting development there. Wonder if the old codger had anything to do with that? I wonder how long until guilt comes over Severus and he realizes he can't just leave her to see if someone finds her?
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
More answers and questions on the way!
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
More answers and questions on the way!
Enjoyed your story so far--I'm sold. Kinda wish I hadn't started it so early in, being terribly impatient to read on, but still am very happy to have picked it up all the same :)
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks you very much!! I will post the chapters as quickly as they will queue them! Thanks for reading!
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
Thanks you very much!! I will post the chapters as quickly as they will queue them! Thanks for reading!
Well, that was ... I'm not sure. Snape was hit with a spell and Hermione has the effects. Interesting.
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
It IS a little dizzying! Never fear, things will get interesting soon enough! Thanks for reading!
Response from sandlapper (Author of True Love's Kiss)
It IS a little dizzying! Never fear, things will get interesting soon enough! Thanks for reading!