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Third Time by Thestral
drinkingcocoa14 Reviews | 5.57/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
The marriage had only one condition: that she never look at him during lovemaking. When Hermione sees Snape in the night, she violates the terms and drives him away. She must complete three tasks and travel to the land of the dead in order to win back her beloved.
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Tea. Of all the things that could breach lifetimes of emotional depletion and abuse, hurt for dead lovers and majestic detachment, tea would be the solution. Well, the essence of tea. Very English. I love it for both its absurdity and reality.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Thank you! I remember wondering how to title the three chapters of this story and laughing when I found the answer.
Hmm.. Kind of an odd story- very original- but odd. I think its one of those stories I'll have to reread to be sure I've gotten all from it I can, make sure there aren't things I missed the first read through. Anyways, thank you for sharing your work with us. :)
thank u for the quick easy read. just what I needed on a night I couldn't sleep!
hugs and chocolate!
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Happy to help! :-) Nom nom, chocolate.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Happy to help! :-) Nom nom, chocolate.
I got so behind on the exchange, I'm simply adoring having the fics show up here now to tempt me. I can tell already I'm going to love this one :o)
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Oh, I know! I barely got to read the exchange this year! And I know it was chock full of gems.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Oh, I know! I barely got to read the exchange this year! And I know it was chock full of gems.
interesting to learn what cvan be going on in the "loveroom". I like your Hermione and Severus. I thought it to be finished but am happy to see there must be more as we have not yet met Hagrid.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
I've just uploaded the third and final chapter to the queue. Thank you for reading!
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
I've just uploaded the third and final chapter to the queue. Thank you for reading!
I definitely think I've read this before; it's got a red check next to it. I don't remember it but that's ok, I loved reading it again. Will there be more to this story (i saw it's a work in progress?). I really like it how it ends her though. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Not sure why it's marked as a WIP; it has these three chapaters. Thank you so much for reading!
I feel like ive read this before, but I don't think I have? I don't know. Anyways, I really liked this first chapter; its good to see both characters getting closure of sorts.
Such an unconventional story which is part of what I love about it. This holds up very well the second time through, and probably more.
Ugh! How very traumatic. Two brilliant people in an unprecedented circumstance. I'd worry, but I know what happens. Still a little heart-breaking, even so.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
I can't tell you how amazed I am that what I wrote can have any emotional effect on a reader. I felt so much like I had no idea what I was doing. Thank you for letting me know.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
I can't tell you how amazed I am that what I wrote can have any emotional effect on a reader. I felt so much like I had no idea what I was doing. Thank you for letting me know.
I loved this story from the exchange, and it was definitely worth a reread. This is a brilliant concept, and there is a dynamic between Severus and Hermione that is not their norm. But, in a good way.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
A reread! That's a lovely compliment. Thank you.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
A reread! That's a lovely compliment. Thank you.
I really liked "trying to be retired" ... Thank you.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Thank YOU! I love the idea of former-BAMF double agent trying to have a genuine relationship.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Thank YOU! I love the idea of former-BAMF double agent trying to have a genuine relationship.
wow!
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Really? Thanks! :-)
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Really? Thanks! :-)
Hey, good start, but you should add a warning of major character death. It was hard to start when I discovered Ron was dead.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Oooh, sorry! Thanks for the heads-up. Added.
Response from drinkingcocoa (Author of Third Time by Thestral)
Oooh, sorry! Thanks for the heads-up. Added.