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Christmas at Hogwarts

Memory

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Drabble/100-Word Friendship Hogwarts Castle 745 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Name Withheld (surprise) Severus Snape

Who is talking with Snape on the Christmas night? A conversation in the form of a radio broadcast.

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Chapter 1: Christmas at Hogwarts


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Memory

Member Since 2007  |  10 Stories  |  Favorited by 24  |  54 Reviews Written  |  343 Review Responses

Italian, born in 1960, married, two kids.

Thanks to all those who will read my stories.

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10/10

mick42

For some reason Colins death hit me very hard, and here we see him alone and sad, wondering if he made the right decision. Severus is right Colin is a hero, the defeat of Voldermort was worth fighting and dying for. As for his death being in vain, there is an old saying " For the want of a soldier, the battle was lost."

Thank you for a tender, and thought provoking piece.  

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Thanks to you for leaving me such a kind review. I too have always felt sorry for Dennis and for the many other little heroes of the last battle. I suppose this story is my way to honour them all.

0/10

HBAR

Kind of sad, but at least they can talk, and they don't necessarily annoy one another.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

I would say that they finally voice what they really think of each other, and by doing so, they discover comforting truths. Thank you for leaving me a message. Best regards from Italy.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

I would say that they finally voice what they really think of each other, and by doing so, they discover comforting truths. Thank you for leaving me a message. Best regards from Italy.

0/10

Very Small Prophet

Sometimes being outrageously brave is necessary, and sometimes it's just wasteful. It's an idea one doesn't often see expressed in the Potterverse, which which courage is presented as the ultimate virtue in all situations, but Slytherins know better. Slytherins never take an unnecessary risk-- only the necessary ones. Severus's risks were necessary; Colin's weren't, and he's dead at sixteen.Touching and nuanced.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Agree. Colin's death has been a waste and didn't change a iota. However, he did what he did because he was sixteen and generous. He reminds me of the many other unfortunate children heroes in the literary world (one for all, little Gavroche in Les Miserables). I suppose JKR sacrificed him to give more pathos to the battle. But, as you say, it was a useless sacrifice. Thank you for your message.

Response from Very Small Prophet (Reviewer)

I also note that most readers (and JKR herself) seem to forget that “little Colin Creevy” was not a tiny, bouncy first-year when he died. He had exactly as much-- and as little-- business being in the battle as Ginny Weasley. I prefer to think he was “tiny in death” because he happened to be shorter than the average sixteen-year-old boy. I’m shorter than average myself.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Agree. Colin's death has been a waste and didn't change a iota. However, he did what he did because he was sixteen and generous. He reminds me of the many other unfortunate children heroes in the literary world (one for all, little Gavroche in Les Miserables). I suppose JKR sacrificed him to give more pathos to the battle. But, as you say, it was a useless sacrifice. Thank you for your message.

Response from Very Small Prophet (Reviewer)

I also note that most readers (and JKR herself) seem to forget that “little Colin Creevy” was not a tiny, bouncy first-year when he died. He had exactly as much-- and as little-- business being in the battle as Ginny Weasley. I prefer to think he was “tiny in death” because he happened to be shorter than the average sixteen-year-old boy. I’m shorter than average myself.

10/10

reader76

Very touching.  Well done.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Glad you liked it. Thank you very much.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Glad you liked it. Thank you very much.

10/10

Phyllidia

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Short but incisive comment ;) I would have liked to find an emoticon to answer, then I thought that words would work better. Thank you.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Short but incisive comment ;) I would have liked to find an emoticon to answer, then I thought that words would work better. Thank you.

8/10

sevibaby

This was very well done. 

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

I'm glad you liked my story. Thank you very much.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

I'm glad you liked my story. Thank you very much.

10/10

MayavanavihariniHarini

Beautifully intense piece!

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Thank you very much!And sorry for the late reply.

Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)

You are most welcome! And please don't apologise.. I am sometimes so late in replying that my friends wonder if they should add a 'late' in front of my name, lol!

10/10

hexgirl

I love this touching little piece. Colin was one of the character deaths that moved me the most. I prefer to think of his sacrifice as symbolic rather than useless - perhaps he was only canon fodder in the end, but he would have always regretted it if he had opted out: that was his nature.You write their moment together so beautifully.

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

 ;)

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

 ;)

10/10

hexgirl

I love this touching little piece. Colin was one of the character deaths that moved me the most. I prefer to think of his sacrifice as symbolic rather than useless - perhaps he was only canon fodder in the end, but he would have always regretted it if he had opted out: that was his nature.You write their moment together so beautifully.

Response from hexgirl (Reviewer)

Oh well, for some reason you got two reviews for the price of one :))

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Thank you very much :)Colin's courage is the courage of those who are pure at heart and don't think of consequences. They always try to do their best and many times they are too impulsive. I have sometimes wondered how many other nameless kids have been sacrificed in the battle. I think that Colin represents them all. He was too young to be allowed to participate, but those who were only one or two years older than him weren't effectively so different. Fred Weasley was more expert and trained than Colin - after all, he already owned a shop - yet he fought with his same reckless enthusiasm.The grim reaper in book seven chose its victims very selectively.Sorry for these confused considerations. Thanks again.

Response from hexgirl (Reviewer)

Oh well, for some reason you got two reviews for the price of one :))

Response from Memory (Author of Christmas at Hogwarts)

Thank you very much :)Colin's courage is the courage of those who are pure at heart and don't think of consequences. They always try to do their best and many times they are too impulsive. I have sometimes wondered how many other nameless kids have been sacrificed in the battle. I think that Colin represents them all. He was too young to be allowed to participate, but those who were only one or two years older than him weren't effectively so different. Fred Weasley was more expert and trained than Colin - after all, he already owned a shop - yet he fought with his same reckless enthusiasm.The grim reaper in book seven chose its victims very selectively.Sorry for these confused considerations. Thanks again.

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