Oh goodness... he gave Harry every happy memory? That's just.. so sad! But chapter two sees him all happy and cared for, yes?

Oh that was so dark and wonderful. I'm glad you went with the challenge.

This was quite chilling but briliant. I always enjoy your writing. 

veery good!

I still feel badly for him.  He sounds demented without the kiss.

He still sounds crazy.

Well good thing I read your AN at the end because I read this much darker.  I was seeing it as though he'd been kissed (or he was utterly broken)--that they were too late.  His response was nothing more than a ghostly echo.

Nicely done with very few words.

The Dmentors feed on happy memories, Severus doesn't have any left, but I still hope that Hermione frees him. New memories can be made, hpoefuly happy ones.  

Oh, wow. That was powerful.

WHOA...Oh Poor Severus...Well done..

Oh, how sad.  Of course, it doesn't mean he can't have new happy memories once he's released.