Chapter Five
Chapter 5 of 19
SquibstressThe last thing Minerva McGonagall ever expected was to become a mother. But when she finds herself unexpectedly pregnant, her life with Albus changes in ways beyond anything they might have predicted.
This is the third story set in the "Epithalamium" universe.
ReviewedAfter the short northern night, the morning dawned clear and cool. Minerva and Albus rose early and went to breakfast in the dining room, which was laid out buffet-style. After Albus had coaxed Minerva to add some eggs and lox to the toast and tea she had eaten, she went to her father's study and knocked softly.
"Come in," came Thorfinn's voice through the heavy oak door. "Ah, good morning, Minerva," he said as she crossed to the large desk to kiss his cheek.
"Good morning, Da. Albus and I thought we'd take a walk—go look at the firth—and wondered if you'd like to come along," she said.
"No, lass, but thank ye. I've still got quite a bit of this to get through before morning's end," he answered, indicating the large stack of parchment on his desk. "Ye two go on. I've a suspicion ye don't get your handsome lad to yourself that often."
She smiled at him. "All right, Da. See you at lunch then?"
"Aye."
Minerva and Albus strolled through the castle grounds to the front gate. They walked at a leisurely pace about a mile through the grassy fields until they came upon the view they were seeking. The fields suddenly opened up and gave way to a craggy cliff, shot through with the brown and tan striated stone of ages. The cliff fell in vertiginous descent to the deceptively calm, azure-blue of the Pentland Firth. Just at the horizon, they could make out the gentle sloping contours of the Orkney Islands.
Albus watched Minerva as she looked out over the water, shielding her eyes from the sun's glare. The ever-present wind had loosed a few strands of hair from her bun, which whipped around her cheeks and jaw like licks of black flame. She looked to him in that moment like the Viking she was by blood—holding vigil as her ancestresses must have done, waiting for their men to return from the North Sea and Norway beyond.
She finally noticed him looking and turned to him, taking both of his hands in hers. "Thank you for coming. It means a lot to him," she said.
"Of course. You don't get to see him often enough. I'm sorry," he said.
"No need to be. It's the way of things, with children—they grow up, leave home," she answered. "I do worry about him, though. All alone in that big house, with me at Hogwarts and Einar in Inverness. I know Einar tries to see him as often as possible, but he's busy, too."
It always amused Albus that Minerva and her family referred to their ancestral home as a "house." It was, in fact, a castle, albeit a small, plain one. The land had belonged to the McGonagalls since their Norse forbears had first crossed the North Sea in the ninth century. The original castle had been erected in the twelfth century—long after the Vikings had been either beaten back across the firth to Orkney and beyond or intermarried with the Celts to settle in and contribute to the brackish history of the kingdom of Alba, soon to be Scotland. The edifice had been knocked down, rebuilt, and added to over the centuries, the family who eventually became the McGonagalls aided by strong magic in keeping what was theirs safe from the upheavals of broadaxe, plague, and gun.
"He's worried about you too," Albus told her.
"Me? Why?" she asked.
"He can't help thinking about what happened to your mother, Minerva," he said, looking her in the eyes.
She turned her head away toward the firth again. "I knew I shouldn't have left you two alone," she said weakly.
He took her hands again and pulled her gently toward him. "Why didn't you tell me?"
"I did."
"Not everything."
"No," she said and sighed. "Not everything. I didn't intend to hide it from you—I almost never think about it, actually. Then when this happened," she said, laying a hand on her belly, "I thought it might worry you, so I just . . . didn't mention it."
"Does Poppy know?"
"Of course. She took a thorough history. It isn't something that's genetic, apparently. Sometimes, it just happens. Rarely, she says."
"Are you scared?" he asked her.
She didn't answer for a minute. "I suppose."
He knew it was a thing she would admit to no one but him.
"But I won't be ruled by fear, Albus," she said.
He smiled. "That's what Thorfinn said."
"I am, after all, my faither's daughter. Sigrid Thorfinnsdóttir," she said, giving her Viking name.
He recognised it as a talisman against fear. Her mother had not been Viking; Morrigan had been Celtic through and through. Albus was not surprised that his wife tended to ally herself with the fierce magic of Odin and Thor rather than the nature-bound spirituality of her mother's people. She was a woman more inclined to bend lightning to her will than to worship its power.
"I wonder who our little one will be like?" Minerva said.
"It had better have your looks."
"And your brains? Is that what you're implying?" she asked, raising an impish eyebrow at him.
"How about a combination of your logical mind and my creative one?"
"Creative? Is that what they're calling it now?"
"And what would you call it, Mrs Dumbledore?"
"Untidy."
His retort was to gather her in his arms and kiss her until she was gasping for breath.
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I'm glad she has such a wise father. But it must take some time to heal from the loss of her child and this near death experience. I hope this will make their marriage closer, since as Thorfinn said, it's either supporting each other or drifting apart.
O this really sounds serious, but at the same time I am glad about your realistic take on the matter. Magic can't solve anything.
Somehow I already had a bad feeling about the pregnancy chapters ago, so I hope she will at least recover soon. Having a hysterectomy has a lot of impact but when it's life saving it has to happen.
oh.....how moving
That was so sad, I'm crying as I write this.
oh - love love love!!!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
This really made me smile. Too much solicitude can be really irritating, especially combined with hormones, and carrying it into the bedroom -- definitely too much of a good thing. I loved the banter:
"Of course. As everyone knows, I am a very proper witch. I simply allow you to use me to satisfy your carnal appetites."
And
"I see. And you don't enjoy it at all,"
And
There, that wasn't so bad, was it?"
Then they go right into discussing telling the staff and students, almost without pause, and it is so consistent and in-character for them, all I can do is roll my eyes at them.
I also liked the bit of back-story of how she became deputy-head, and her thoughts on how motherhood changes things. It's a shame she thinks her professional life should at least appear to take precedence over her personal life, but its very, very in-character for Minerva.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Ah, the hazards of the profession. I imagine it's rather difficult to avoid "shop talk" when you're a couple who both work and live at the same school.I think the difficulty of balancing one's professional life with parenthood falls inordinately on women--even in the wizarding world.Thanks for reading!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Ah, the hazards of the profession. I imagine it's rather difficult to avoid "shop talk" when you're a couple who both work and live at the same school.I think the difficulty of balancing one's professional life with parenthood falls inordinately on women--even in the wizarding world.Thanks for reading!
I really like this chapter, from Poppy's reaction ('lucky girl' indeed!), to Albus reading poetry to Minerva and carrying her to bed. You really show just how much he adores her. I especially enjoyed the playful teasing at the beginning.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought at least one "fluffy" chapter might be in order here, LOL!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought at least one "fluffy" chapter might be in order here, LOL!
Minerva needs to take a deep breath. She is worrying too much about what other people think, but that's Minerva. I don't think I've read a story that featured a married, pregnant Minerva before and can't wait to see how it turns out.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I think Minerva is used to keeping her private life private, so this is going to be a bit of an ordeal for her.I've read a few preganant!Minerva stories, so I decided to try my hand. I hope you enjoy it.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I think Minerva is used to keeping her private life private, so this is going to be a bit of an ordeal for her.I've read a few preganant!Minerva stories, so I decided to try my hand. I hope you enjoy it.
well written for such a difficult topic
I think Molly's mind would be blown if she knew Minerva was pregnant :) I imagine Molly's going to have a few things to say to her brothers. Delightful chapter. Thanks.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
It might at that, LOL!This was a fun chapter to write. Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
It might at that, LOL!This was a fun chapter to write. Glad you enjoyed it.
I have read this on ffnet, and am looking forward to reading it here, but I'll try to refrain from commenting on events until they unfold.
I did enjoy this chapter very much. The humor (how did that happen?) is great, and I also detect a bit of the nervous excitement that is bound to accompany such news. I liked Albus's reaction, and his willingness to support Minerva in her decision. The way he phrases it 'then so do I' makes it seem that he would support whatever decision she made, and that is a very good trait in a husband!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for giving it another go here!I'm glad you liked Albus's reaction; I think he knows on which side his bread is buttered.Cheers!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for giving it another go here!I'm glad you liked Albus's reaction; I think he knows on which side his bread is buttered.Cheers!
You know I've read this on ffnet and you already know how much trouble I have reading this - and you know why - so I won't go into all that. What I will go into is what I love about this piece ... so - here goes.*snip*"But how?" Minerva asked in disbelief.Poppy smiled. If only she had a Sickle for every time a dismayed sixth- or seventh-year asked her that, she'd be rich as the Malfoys. She said, "Well, there's the staff-room floor, oh, and Albus' desk, of course, and your bed—that's traditional—and—""Poppy, this is not a joke!" Minerva broke in.*snip*Laughs and laughs and laughs and laughs *wipes eyes* Not sure what I love more, Poppy's cheek or Minerva's outrage - but both strike me as hilarious - or maybe its Poppy's knowledge of Minerva's rigidity that causes her to be sarcastic, expecting the outrage - I'm not exactly sure, but its funny! *snip*Albus stepped into her sitting room, chessboard in hand and a characteristic twinkle in his blue eyes. He set the chessboard down on a table and asked, "Are we alone?"It had been their standard greeting for the past two years, ever since Albus had come into her rooms for one of their Saturday trysts, grabbed her, stopping her protesting mouth with a kiss, and had her blouse halfway open before he noticed a very embarrassed Filius Flitwick attempting to make a rapid and discreet exit. The tiny Charms professor, who had been obscured by the tall back of a chair, had shown up at Minerva's quarters unexpectedly, hoping to discuss a Transfiguration article she had written. He hadn't been able to look at either of them for a week. Albus had thought it was funny.*snip*
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
shares something with Albus because
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
thinks this be funny also! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAYou little exhibitionist you! *chuckles**snip*She shifted to her side, propping her head on her hand so she could look at his face. "I'm pregnant.""How?"he asked."Given what we have just spent the past hour doing, I'm surprised you have to ask that," she said, forgetting that she had asked Poppy Pomfrey exactly the same question not three days ago.*snip**just grins* Ahhhh, I so love Epith/Verse Minerva/Albus banter.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for leaving a comment here--I've decided to start posting it, as I'm almost done with Epithalmium (believe it or not!) and once this gets posted, it will be the complerte series (for now, anyway.)You needn't feel compelled to read it again if it's too painful--I can certainly understand that.I'm glad you enjoyed the banter.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
shares something with Albus because
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
thinks this be funny also! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAYou little exhibitionist you! *chuckles**snip*She shifted to her side, propping her head on her hand so she could look at his face. "I'm pregnant.""How?"he asked."Given what we have just spent the past hour doing, I'm surprised you have to ask that," she said, forgetting that she had asked Poppy Pomfrey exactly the same question not three days ago.*snip**just grins* Ahhhh, I so love Epith/Verse Minerva/Albus banter.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for leaving a comment here--I've decided to start posting it, as I'm almost done with Epithalmium (believe it or not!) and once this gets posted, it will be the complerte series (for now, anyway.)You needn't feel compelled to read it again if it's too painful--I can certainly understand that.I'm glad you enjoyed the banter.