For James's Shoes

Noelani Sitara

4 Reviews | 5.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Shrieking Shack 516 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Lily (Evans) Potter Sirius Black

He would have done almost anything except betray his best friend. 2nd in LJ community hpfic_contest's Secret Challenge.

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10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Ah, poor guy. I have a feeling that it wasn't only James that was taken with Lily, perhaps Snape or Remus... but it never crossed my mind that Sirius could be. Great story and way to utilize canon. I really liked it. Thanks for posting.

Response from Noelani Sitara (Author of For James's Shoes)

:) thanks! It never crossed my mind either until I wrote it - I'm still unsure where it came from.

0/10

snapes_faerie

I dont like sirius normally but I feel sorry for him in this story unrequited love is hard and it is definitely a good idea of why he would be there laughing his head off when everything went wrong. good!

Response from Noelani Sitara (Author of For James's Shoes)

Thanks :) Before writing this, I hadn't ever considered Sirius - then when I thought of Sirius/Lily everything just fell into place.

10/10

zambonigirl

I can't believe that no one has reviewed this yet! So very good and poignant. you did a wonderful job in conveying strong emotions in a very short amount of time, and using a perspective that I have never thought of. Bravo!

Response from Noelani Sitara (Author of For James's Shoes)

What a lovely review - Thank you!

0/10

EverMystique

Very sad, suffering with unrequited love.

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