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Three Times it Rained

imhilien

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Angst Romance Drabble/100-Word Epilogue What Epilogue? GrangerSnape100 133 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Three times in the life of Severus it rained.

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Member Since 2005  |  26 Stories  |  Favorited by 53  |  99 Reviews Written  |  308 Review Responses

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anoesis

Such lovely contrasts between each scene - you can see him evolve into Professor Snape, then back into Severus in these.

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you thought so. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you thought so. :)

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phoenix

Nicely told. I especially love the first part.

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

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Phyllidia

Nice job!  Well done.

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. ^_^

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. ^_^

10/10

HBAR

An interesting contrast in all three situations.  I like it.

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. ^_^

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. ^_^

10/10

sunny33

I like the simplicity. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

10/10

mikimoto

This is really good.  It is economical word-wise, but it says so much emotion-wise.  It is so easy to look at the weather and think that it always means the same thing mood-wise: sunny weather is happy, rainy weather is depressing.  But here he has a range of emotions all in the rain and all as a result of the rain.  The rain contributes a key element but it doesn't reflect the mood; and in doing so, it doesn't become the cliche.

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thank you for your kind review! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thank you for your kind review! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.

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reader76

I like it.  Nice range in just a few words.

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. ^_^

Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)

Thanks for reviewing. ^_^

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