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Three Times it Rained
imhilien7 Reviews | 4.29/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
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Reviews for Three Times it Rained
Such lovely contrasts between each scene - you can see him evolve into Professor Snape, then back into Severus in these.
Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)
Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you thought so. :)
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Nicely told. I especially love the first part.
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Thanks for reviewing. :)
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Nice job! Well done.
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Thanks for reviewing. ^_^
Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)
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An interesting contrast in all three situations. I like it.
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Thanks for reviewing. ^_^
Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)
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I like the simplicity. :)
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This is really good. It is economical word-wise, but it says so much emotion-wise. It is so easy to look at the weather and think that it always means the same thing mood-wise: sunny weather is happy, rainy weather is depressing. But here he has a range of emotions all in the rain and all as a result of the rain. The rain contributes a key element but it doesn't reflect the mood; and in doing so, it doesn't become the cliche.
Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)
Thank you for your kind review! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.
Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)
Thank you for your kind review! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.
I like it. Nice range in just a few words.
Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)
Thanks for reviewing. ^_^
Response from imhilien (Author of Three Times it Rained)
Thanks for reviewing. ^_^