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Chapter 1 of 1
sunny33Soon after Dumbledore's death, Remus arranges a meeting with Severus in the Shrieking Shack.
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“I see you came alone.”
“I gave you my word, Severus. No Aurors. No wand. Search me if you wish.”
“No need.”
“You trust me then?”
“I trust no-one. If you were carrying a wand, you could not have entered the Shack.”
“I see. Still, at least you came.”
“Why here?”
“Why not? You have access. I have access. No-one is likely to interrupt us.”
“What do you want?”
“I want a lot of things, but the truth would be a good start.”
“There are many truths, wolf. As many as there are ways of bending them.”
“Perhaps. But I believe a man can be forced to live one truth while his inclination tends to other directions.”
“Are you talking about me or yourself?”
“Both of us. Truth is a complex matter. One often doesn’t see the events leading to an action, and they may be crucial to view the scene in context.”
“Sometimes, that is the intention. It may be critical for a certain understanding to be reached in order to further one’s goals in other areas.”
“At what cost? Is it worth it, Severus?”
“It is everything!”
“But... your reputation. Your safety. Your life.”
“Is nothing! I do what must be done.”
“It’s too much. You’re worth more than the meat of a sacrifice offered to the altar of Dumbledore’s grand plan. There must be another way.”
“No. Lupin... Remus. There’s no other way. No, please don’t touch me. I can’t—”
“Feel me, Severus. Feel my hand on your skin. You press your face against my hand despite your denials. Who was the last person who gave you the simple warmth of their touch?”
“I don’t need your pity, wolf. Go back to your wife!”
“My wife. She’s an incredible woman, Severus. No, don’t sneer. I’m very fond of her. But I wouldn’t have chosen her if Albus Dumbledore hadn’t forced me to take an Unbreakable Vow. I believe that was when he let it slip it wasn’t the first Unbreakable Vow he’d used.”
“Why?”
“Why did he use a Vow?”
“That as well. Why did he force you to marry Nymphadora Tonks?”
“He knew about us, Severus. He knew, and the canny old bastard didn’t want his spy to have any means of succour after he had appeared to perform the ultimate betrayal. He forced me to marry Tonks and remain silent about the Vow so you would have no reason not to carry out his wishes.”
“Why are you telling me this now?”
“He’s dead. The Vow is void.”
“Indeed, but why are you here?”
“Someone needs to be. Who better than the man who loved you? Still loves you. You’re not alone, Severus. And one day...”
“One day...”
DEATHLY HALLOWS: PART ONE
Scene: Shrieking Shack.
Characters: Lupin, Snape
NB: deleted
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“Wonder why this scene was cut.”
“The scriptwriter was playing around with it. The director told him it was superfluous. Never made it past the first draft.”
“I’ll toss it then.”
“Might as well.”
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A/N: This was written for the ninth and final week of the snupin_ldws on LiveJournal. It won by only one vote. Thanks to quaffswinegaily for her help.
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Absolutely heartbreaking for all concerned. Dumbeldors disregard for the feelings of others is sickening.
Your writing however is wonderful.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Other Vow)
Thank you, Mick! :)
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Very interesting. I can definitely see Dumbledore doing something like that.
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Thanks. :)
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Ok... I shouldn't be read or reviewing! I've got review-a-thon stuff to tally! But here I am getting caught up in reading fic and reviewing, instead of checking fic elgibility, but who can blame me! This fic simply is lovely! Well done, Sunny. :)
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Thanks, Mel. xx :)
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Brilliant! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you. :)
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Love it. Well done.
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Thanks, chook. :)
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Thanks, chook. :)
Superfluous?? Oh, sure, Severus' wellbeing was always superfluous... ruddy director.Thanks, Sunny, for caring for him!
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Thanks,
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One vote, eh? Must have been some awesome stories competing. ^_^
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There were! :)
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There were! :)
Lovely--love all of your Snape and Lupin--thank you for all of the care and love you give them! Really lovely work, as always!!!xxx Congratulations!
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L0ve the icons! :)
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This just makes my heart hurt. So well done. Congrats on the win.
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Thank you. :)
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Thank you. :)
Hi sunny33! I have really enjoyed reading this series. Beautifully written - less is so, so much more sometimes! Thanks for uploading.
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Yes. Writing to a word limit makes you take care with every word. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Other Vow)
Yes. Writing to a word limit makes you take care with every word. :)
I bow to your greatness. This was wonderful. You could continue with this storyline. I would love to see where it goes, AU of course.
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Thank you, dear. :)
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Thank you, dear. :)