The Scarf
AnneM13 Reviews | 13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
His obsession started with a red dress, some perfume, and a scarf. Anything that happened after that wasn't his fault. Really, it wasn't.
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Looks like the author no longer posts here, so I'm just letting people know this story is complete over at Granger Enchanted. It's well worth reading in full.
It's really interesting to see how he's gaining on her, but she's gaining on him, too. It's almost sweet that he couldn't seem to resist coming back to check on her. Well done.
She's deeply commited now, and he seems equally so.
What a gift! That will add some depth to their... relationship, if it could be called that.
He's creating a very elaborate trap for her, I see. Perhaps he's not entirely immune to it, himself.
This continues to be intriguing, sexy, and so very interesting. Your Scabior is magnificent.
This is such a nice surprise! A rarepair with a creepyness factor I really adore. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
I know, it is a bit creepy isn't it? Sort of like a pirate sort of thing, or something, or at least in my mind. I really had to keep reminding myself that Hermione wouldn't be completely taken in by him, and that she would remain strong, and that was hard. thanks for reading!
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
I know, it is a bit creepy isn't it? Sort of like a pirate sort of thing, or something, or at least in my mind. I really had to keep reminding myself that Hermione wouldn't be completely taken in by him, and that she would remain strong, and that was hard. thanks for reading!
He's creepy and charming at the same time. Wonderful tension in this. Nicely done.
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
As the story progresses, he continues on being a bit creepy, I'm afraid, and it was a fine line to walk for me, because I'm usually a 'sunshine and roses' fluffy writer, and this wasn't my normal 'fluff' in any way. Thank you for reading.
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
It even gets a bit creeper and the suspense level increases a bit in later chapters. It's funny how I find the word 'creepy' as a compliment in this story. This was truly a different sort of story for me. Usually I write HEA long Dramiones, so this was VERY different!
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
As the story progresses, he continues on being a bit creepy, I'm afraid, and it was a fine line to walk for me, because I'm usually a 'sunshine and roses' fluffy writer, and this wasn't my normal 'fluff' in any way. Thank you for reading.
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
It even gets a bit creeper and the suspense level increases a bit in later chapters. It's funny how I find the word 'creepy' as a compliment in this story. This was truly a different sort of story for me. Usually I write HEA long Dramiones, so this was VERY different!
Ooooohhhh......this is goooooooood. Great dialogue from Scabior. Great job describing HG's confusing emotions. Nick Moran had about what...8 minutes of screen time? Yet I couldn't tear my eyes away from him on that screen. This story is just as intoxicating, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
I couldn't take my eyes off him either. I have to admit that I didn't write this until I watched the blue ray copy of HP DH Part I, and I saw the deleted scenes of Scabior and heard Nick Moran explain them, and that made me wish they had left them in the movie. Also, that was when I realized 'The Scarf' he wore was hers and I thought, yeah, okay...the scarf!Thanks!
“Now why did you have to go and touch me? That wasn’t good. You sealed your fate now, Beautiful.”This line just gives me the shivers time and time again! The chemistry and nuance and tension between Scabior and Hermione is arousingly undeniable!!! 
Just love your moment to moment description between these two as well as the wonderful, engaging dialogue and haptic feeling when reading your work-- thank you! More, more, more!
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
I had more fun writing Scabior than I've had in a very long time. He's almost as much fun as writing Lucius, whom I've always loved writing. I'm not sure what that has to say about my personality, but there you go! Thanks, and I hope you continue to enjoy!
A Hermione/Scabior pairing *happy dance*! Captivating, intriguing and spot-on characterisations - yum! Can feel the dangerous, but undeniable chemistry between these two - double yum! Love the feisty Hermione (but also the poignancy of her missing her mother, etc., such gentle, bittersweet details) and the dubious intentions of Scabior... Wonderful!
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
I think your review captured the essence of my story perfectly!! Thanks! I hope you like the upcoming chapters, too!
Ah, delicous and dark - like bitter chocolate.
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
This story is a bit darker for me. Hermione will struggle with the pull he seems to have over her in the chapters coming up. Thanks for reading!
Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)
Looking forward to the change of pace. Nice to see a different sort of HG story.
Wow, creepy! I'm glad she got out of there.
Response from AnneM (Author of The Scarf)
She got away from him this time, but there's always the next time, right? thanks!